How can one tell if someone is suited for a particular job? Are some jobs for women and some for men? Some may argue that a certain set of jobs can only be done by men and men alone. This is due to the common human mentality that women are the wekaer gender and so they will not be suitable for many tasks. However, it is high time that we realise that women are not far behind and are equally capable. They have proven to give competition and have even thwarted men in several fields.
Let us consider the case of the athlete PT Usha. She aspired to take part in the olympics from a very young age. However, she hailed from a very remote village and her family and relatives were not very supportive of her dream. This reluctance from the family side was because of the fact that Usha had been a girl. Being a girl child in India has its difficulties. Everybody around will force you to stick to the four sides of the wall and work for the family. Even though Usha was surrounded by people who tried their level best to debase her. She never gave up and made it a point to train during her free time. She started taking up every opportunity that came by and came back with the winning medal. This was surprising for everyone around and that's when people started realising the potential Usha had. Usha started climbing up the ladder swiftly and eventually Usha won a medal for India in the Olympics.
Consider the case of Priyanka Chopra. She is currently considered one of the most succesful actors under the sun. She is an inspiration for all the girls in the world. As discussed in the above example, as a child, Priyanka also came from a not so affluent family. They aslo believed Priyanka being a girl child will end up marrying some boy from a nearby village. But did this stop Priyanka from giving up on her dreams? No! She took a stand and belived in herself and proved everyone around her wrong. The acting profession being very uncertain, Priyanka failed several times before she made her first debut. Priyanka has shown the world that women are not different from men.
To conclude,the abovestated examples show that women have come right up to the top in several fields despite their physical differences. We cannot deny the fact that there are no physical differences between men and women, but this does not mean they are not equally suited for tasks.
- "Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men 49
- The city council of Town X has proposed reducing the city’s electric expenses by switching all the lights in public buildings from incandescent bulbs to light-emitting diodes (LEDs). The switch would be made gradually as the old incandescent bulbs burn 65
- Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to ad 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
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... give competition and have even thwarted men in several fields. Let us consid...
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Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...his reluctance from the family side was because of the fact that Usha had been a girl. Being a girl chil...
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...es of the wall and work for the family. Even though Usha was surrounded by people who tried...
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... won a medal for India in the Olympics. Consider the case of Priyanka Chopra. Sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52436194896 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2611515297 2.79657885939 81% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53596287703 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3553710728 60.3974514979 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.6428571429 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.3928571429 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.35714285714 5.21951772744 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156894559235 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410521270563 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423543240311 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110995566065 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599169553987 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 14.1392134831 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 48.8420337079 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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