Men and women physical structure
Whenever a human is born his/her gender and body structure were decided by their parent's genes. Men and women do have different body structures but as per the prompt they are not suited for many tasks equally. I strongly disagree with the prompt's claim. I will provide the following three reasons for supporting my position.
Firstly, for performing any task, an individual should have the confidence and urge to do that task rather than a specific body structure. For instance, one of my male friends is enough rich, so sometimes he does not perform office tasks properly on their side my other female friend is in need and she is not that much financially strong. She is very confident and she has the urge to work for her family. She performs very well in many hazardous tasks that many males cannot do. So willpower is more important to perform the task.
Secondly, nowadays many women and men are working together to complete many complex tasks irrespective of their gender and body structure. For example, In 2010 there was one project performed by the Indian space research organization (ISRO) named Chandra Ryan 2.0. In this project, many hazardous and tactical works were performed by a team of scientists which consist of 3 men and 3 women. Considering their success, the government appreciated the whole team which is the perfect example of working together and forgetting body structure.
In Conclusion, there exist some time periods like pregnancy and child care in which women need a break or they can't perform up to the mark during those days but except for this situation, I don't think that men and women are not equally suited for any work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'urge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...ual should have the confidence and urge to do that task rather than a specific body s...
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Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...are in which women need a break or they cant perform up to the mark during those day...
^^^^
Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e days but except for this situation, I dont think that men and women are not equall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, except for, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 284.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84154929577 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52441706372 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595070422535 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 704.065955056 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7614003458 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.769230769 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 5.21951772744 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153756689457 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560036032827 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808573274727 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114292690525 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695841635394 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.