Malaria parasite essay
The lecture and the reading passage tell about strategies to eradicate parasite causing malaria. The author belives that following three strategy mentioned in writting will eradicate disease. However, the speaker in the reading disagree with these startegies and he claims that these startegy will not going to helpful.
Firstly, the passage states that if we are able to determine exact strain of parasite causing malaria we can treat it using prescribed medicine. However, the professor points out that, no medicine can cure malaria at all. Generally used medicines like chloro and ethro are no longer efficient for the treatment of malaria patient. Because, most of the malaria strains developed resistance to these medicine so these medicine usage will be of no use.
Secondly, the author mentions that killing mosquitos by spraiying chemical where they stay and relesing mosquito eating fish like guppies will decline their population. Again, the lecturer holds the flaws in this argument, he explains that the chemical we are going to use for sprying and larvae killing fish will not reach to all locations wherever we required. Additionally, he stated that adult mosquitos usually fly at high speed so it is not helpful to spray chemical.
The another reason the author feels that sterile insect technique will not develop eggs of mosquitos and that eventually reduce their population. The teacher rebuts this argument and states that, sterile mosqutoies are not much attracted to female so their reproduction will not occur. However, other not sterile male will mate and increase population.
To sum up, both author and speaker hold conflicting views.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
... he claims that these startegy will not going to helpful. Firstly, the passage state...
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Line 2, column 392, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this medicine' or 'these medicines'?
Suggestion: this medicine; these medicines
...malaria strains developed resistance to these medicine so these medicine usage will be of no u...
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Line 2, column 410, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this medicine' or 'these medicines'?
Suggestion: this medicine; these medicines
...veloped resistance to these medicine so these medicine usage will be of no use. Secondly, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 263.0 270.72406181 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32699619772 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54455873661 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589353612167 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1645541024 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.071428571 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06452816374 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120649104965 0.272083759551 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473574470327 0.0996497079465 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735368355638 0.0662205650399 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0581600959142 0.162205337803 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753853557067 0.0443174109184 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.8541721854 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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