The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth.
In statement claims of the most effective way of understanding contemporary culture is scrutiny of young people’s trend. Young people have many ideas with originality and reluctant to routine works, or try to behave differently than other age. They are willing to do the “different” way of making a trend as nobody did in the past. Trend can be various; music, paint, and fashions are probably works for the trend. Unfortunately, understanding the contemporary culture is to understand the phenomenon of the society and society makes millions, or billions of aspects interrelated with various types, which can be politics, science, anthropology, history. There are three valuable reasons to disagree the statement.
First and foremost, contemporary culture is not only for the trends of youth; tradition is the key word for the contemporary culture. Young people are making world differently, but the fact is that youth’s trend is only part of the contemporary culture. Eating turkey in the Thanksgiving Day is not only for the young people but for the family with range of whole age. It is a tradition of the whole family eating the turkey with appreciating about food.
Furthermore, contemporary culture can be a phenomena of long-standing for contemporary society. United States has been suffered about race inequality. Also, politics grasped some part of the discriminatory policy, which made more miserable situation. Rosa Park engendered the boycotting the bus and Martin Luther King Jr made an approach about race equality with thundering voice; the declamation of the race equality was one of most important step in society. Contemporary people in that time was trying to understand why that was important step, found the value that the human race should not be discriminated by color. Hence, phenomena of long-standing can be a contemporary culture.
Lastly, participation makes contemporary culture. If there is no such possibility of participation in the culture, then it is not contemporary culture anymore. The statement claims youth trends make contemporary culture because young people participate what they pursue and what they want. However, it is not only happened in young people. Recently, the president Trump got elected as 45th president of United States. This is one way of understanding contemporary culture because there are two different groups; one who likes Trump or the other. The way that people participated in this election is to vote. Another method of participation is debate; people discuss about how president Trump make US great again is one of the contemporary culture.
In closing, with those three reasons, the contemporary culture is not confined within trends of youth; contemporary culture is for the people who have the tradition, participation, and phenomena of long-standing for contemporary society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a phenomenon' or simply 'phenomena'?
Suggestion: a phenomenon; phenomena
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2435.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 446.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45964125561 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24645172651 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466367713004 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 780.3 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.1813146634 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.84 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326720843447 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954462961056 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10379347621 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196033659607 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607264362557 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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