Most people recognize the benefits of individuality, but the fact is that personal economic success requires conformity.
The argument above holds two position one is that most of the people comprehend the benefits of individuality and other is despite the easy recognition for individuality an personal economic success required conformity. I concede with the argument of the author completely in regards for our current pervasive societal predicaments.
As the author states most people recognize the benefits of individuality which is absolute true. We can impute this quality of uniqueness to the extra- ordinary talent in any fields like arts, science, communication or tot he unique ideas and the action taken to implement those ideas by the individual. The most intelligent student in the class stand out because of his/ her individuality. Similar things apply to the great leaders or the famous person in the world who stand out because of their unique ideas.
But to assert these uniqueness to the individuals own benefit one must conform tot he social norms and set laws. Even if some people get away with short term benefits with their exceptional ideas and harming the society but that it not sustainable in the long term of personal benefit. Take Pablo Escobar for example, everyone knows he is a extraordinary talent individual but his ideas were used with out conformities which led to short term economic success but cost him mental peace and death at the end.
But not all existing societal norms should be accepted, they are several cases of famous individuals who came forward and did not conform with societal rules and that might not have account for quick economic personal growth but it changed the work for good. Lets take Mahatma Gandhi, Marthin King Luther Jr for example. Who came forward with defiance of conformity and changed the world's view.
In sum, to stand out of the queue it requires any individual to have some uniqueness but in order to make that individual quality acceptable in the society he/she must conform to the establish set of values in terms of law and order and make sure his idea of action does not harm anybody in the society, after all societal norms are formed to maintain the mutual respects in its beings. But this varies when it comes to the existing social problems which needs to be addressed by individuals as we have seen throughout the course of history.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... the easy recognition for individuality an personal economic success required conf...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nt pervasive societal predicaments. As the author states most people recognize...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uniqueness to the extra- ordinary talent in any fields like arts, science, commun...
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Message: Did you mean 'to the'?
Suggestion: to the
...ds like arts, science, communication or tot he unique ideas and the action taken to im...
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Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this uniqueness' or 'these uniquenesses'?
Suggestion: this uniqueness; these uniquenesses
...f their unique ideas. But to assert these uniqueness to the individuals own benefit one must...
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Message: Did you mean 'to the'?
Suggestion: to the
...ndividuals own benefit one must conform tot he social norms and set laws. Even if some...
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Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...cobar for example, everyone knows he is a extraordinary talent individual but his...
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Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...lent individual but his ideas were used with out conformities which led to short term ec...
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...rowth but it changed the work for good. Lets take Mahatma Gandhi, Marthin King Luthe...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e in the society he/she must conform to the establish set of values in terms of law and order...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, after all, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 388.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94845360825 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63025534339 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533505154639 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.9082626517 60.3974514979 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.142857143 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316799503526 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106588148572 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111562237749 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171615943073 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730735761615 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.