A nation should require all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter the college
As all teenagers study to get in the university, some faculty suggests that all students should learn the same national curriculum until they enter college. Although some opponents argued that the national curriculum may not helpful for students while they study in the college, I believe the fundamental theory of the national curriculum would enhance their ability to study in the college.
Since youngsters study at school, the national curriculum will improve them easier to study the college courses such as if students learn physics first when they are in high school, the Mechanics and the curriculum will be easier to them to study. Another evidence prove that if youngsters started to learn software since they are young, the software program might become easier for them when they are learning C++ or other cording programs. As the above evidences suggest that the nation should require all students to learn the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Opponents argued that the national curriculum are too much for students to study that they might plague with the pressure because their homework is too much to complete, also, the school needs to hire specialize teacher for students to study different national curriculum that the school cannot afford such high price to elaborate a school. However, the course is just a fundamental subject that students won't handle too much works, besides, since the curriculum is the basic subject that the school doesn't need to hire specialize professor to teach students, it might be the college's duties. In Taiwan high school, most students need to learn English, Math, History and Physics that make sure youngsters can learn college courses smoothly, so the claim, students need to study the same curriculum, will enhance students abilities to study in colleges.
Although students study national curriculum will elevate their ability to study in the college, there might some few groups who don't need to study national curriculum such as youngsters who study arts or music. Since those students study the special lesson, the national curriculum might become useful to them after they enter the university. Those students who are already find their dream to achieve need another specialize school to afford specialize lesson to learn. Since the music and art lesson will not afford in normal school and the national curriculum will not improve their abilities to study music or arts. By those reason, only a few groups of people, who has already find their ambition to specialize experts, don’t require to study the national curriculum.
As the aforementioned suggests that the nation should recommended student to study the national curriculum. If some students have already find their ambition and surely found the national course is useless for them while they are study in the college. Otherwise all youngsters should learn the national curriculum to enhance their ability to compete with other in the high competition college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2525.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 480.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26041666667 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47884714327 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.370833333333 0.4932671777 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 775.8 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3560529841 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.8125 118.986275619 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.505545222615 0.243740707755 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.242930199899 0.0831039109588 292% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158586306828 0.0758088955206 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.362232117702 0.150359130593 241% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826183239314 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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