Educational system of a nation is supposed to be unbiased towards all it's citizen. There are enormous benefits of adopting a single national curriculum for the entire country. However, the government face difficulties in implementing the curriculum in a vast nation like India. For instance, India accomodates a multi-linguistic demarcation for it's states, where each of them follow their own mother tongue driven curriculum. Sometimes, it becomes challenging for the students to face a national competitive entrance examination to get placed in to renowned universities.
Despite the hurdles, education department can frame a national curriculum with a common language and articulate them in a proper method to instil equality among the students acquiring knowledge. Thus, an unbiased way to bestow education among various classes of people can improve competitiveness among the students. Students are expected to exact their knowledge to top the chart for all national examination they attempt.
Enforcement of a national curriculum, in fact helps in an effective nation building. With equal knowledge, educational institutions are able to identify the meritorious students with the same intensity and capabality in various fields of studies. For example, Graduation Record Examination which is a common global examination for people worldwide enables the top notch universities to identify extraordinarily exceptional students based on their band scores.
To recapitulate, common pattern in education is required to enrich the nation with a higher standard of education, so that, each of it's equaly erudite youths can bring in a great transformation for the future. Disparities among the people is easily eradicated with such a constructive approach towards education system.
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Suggestion: top-notch
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...tive approach towards education system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 264.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75757575758 5.05705443957 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28815806662 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59117977528 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6603221965 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.923076923 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246990439137 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946877855771 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042765738475 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151356431222 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364475997731 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 48.8420337079 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.1639044944 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.38706741573 123% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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