A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
In this rapidly growing world, education plays an important role in shapeing your lives and achieveing the dream you desire. It is the key to our golden ticket to achieve our goals. The prompt suggests that, a nation should force its students to take up the same mundane curriculum until they enter college. In my openion, I aversly disagree with this statement, beacause it might not be an approperiate way to force students to take up the same course beform entering college.
Everyones interest and personality to look after the evnitonment in which an individual want to live- in what perticulat field they want to make their carier and persue knowledge- is diffrent for each and every human being. It solely depends on their will and natureal inclination towards a perticular subject or topic. It would be a maleficient act to force someone to persue the subjects agains their will and interest.
For example, if Elon Musk, founder and ceo of tesla, would have forced by the natonal curriculum to take up history or any other irrelative subjects which were against his interest. Then the most advanced and futurestic company he has developed, would not have been developed and his natural talents might have gone to waste. Thus, the focus should be more no the subjects that the student might like to persue.
As the individual knows his own interests and the subjects in which he keen intrest in them. Then the schools should start teaching the stidents these subjects right from the begenning and not from the college life. This will save a lit of timw and energy which was diverted due to persue of other not interested subjects. This will reduce the stress and burden on the students.
Of course, an individual should have an overall development, knowledge about every field at the start of his eduactional career. But this might not be the case, as it will frustrate the studen while learning those uninterested subjects and weaken his concentration in the subjects which he likes the most
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...o waste. Thus, the focus should be more no the subjects that the student might lik...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, thus, while, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 340.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91176470588 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55544740088 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570588235294 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7183896736 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.375 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163626283915 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507706149663 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610069118982 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845541828386 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603146367615 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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