According to the prompt, it states that every student ofthe nation should be educated on same national curriculum until the college. Proposal like this should be blostered by the citizen of the nation. This shall be supported by the below outlined two reasons. But i do concede their are some augment from other side.
First of all, the proposal above provide equality platform to students from various finacial background. For example, if the whole nation is on same curriculum, then both top private institute and government aided institute student have uniform curriculum despite of thier finacial background. In Addition, it also break the orthodox pratice for middle class family to spend half of their life income in their childrens education.
Furthermore, by following the above idea it also easy to classify student skills. For example if their is a same stream for everyone, it is easy to scale student skills inspite of their stream. In addition, National level ranking for students also provided accurately because of same stream.
Though, their are numerous advantage of same stream curriculum, some concede that if their is an error in particular curriculum the student from whole nation is educated with the same error. But this might the case in majority, since it is an national curriculum it will be analysied by several education department authorities, So the chances of error is negligible.
To conclude, I mostly go with the proposal above because it provide equality among student from various finacial background and also easy to rank the student nationalwise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, for example, in addition, in particular, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 2235.4752809 60% => OK
No of words: 255.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26274509804 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68970440828 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9755066482 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.230769231 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2012260322 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795308789897 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633177118766 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117294872471 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327684172623 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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