Why should there be a standardization of educational curriculum when there is so much room for students to expand and explore their horizons? Many institutions follow this form of education in an effort to create an equal playing ground between students and prepare them for higher learning. But this can actually hinder most students from finding what their true educational niche is, and how they can work towards it. In today's educational system, there should not be a standardization of educational curriculum before college in order to give every individual the opportunity to pursue their dreams.
If each school were to be required to teach the same curriculum to every student in the nation, shouldn't there be similar requirements for career selection? All students would be cowed into learning the same information as everybody else, no matter what their future endeavors would be. If this was to be implemented similarly on adults and how they choose future careers, there would be a national outrage. But this is not the case, and younger generations should be given the opportunity to choose how they will be educated so that they can be better prepared for their own futures.
To require all institutions to educate their students the same way would prevent any efforts to improve and transform education in the ways many schools have already. Newly established STEM schools all over the nation have curriculum focused on Science, Technology, Engineering, and Medicine to allow for their students to pursue what they are passionate about. Implementing a national requirement for education would force these specialized schools to either close down or completely destroy all of the work they have done for their students. Schools like these are transforming the way education has been perceived, and any actions done to change their methods would be a mistake.
Students should be given an opportunity to choose how they are educated even before college to stimulate creativity and allow for changes in the current educational system. In doing so, no student will be cowed into taking classes they don't need, and inspire them to work towards what they want to do in their lives.
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be 62
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 50
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'if', 'similarly', 'so', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208333333333 0.240241500013 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.208333333333 0.157235817809 132% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0651041666667 0.0880659088768 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0416666666667 0.0497285424764 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0572916666667 0.0444667217837 129% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0911458333333 0.12292977631 74% => OK
Participles: 0.0572916666667 0.0406280797675 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78239212536 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0520833333333 0.030933414821 168% => OK
Particles: 0.00260416666667 0.0016655270985 156% => OK
Determiners: 0.0989583333333 0.0997080785238 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0390625 0.0249443105267 157% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0260416666667 0.0148568991511 175% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2201.0 2732.02544248 81% => OK
No of words: 358.0 452.878318584 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14804469274 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.374301675978 0.366273622748 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.284916201117 0.280924506359 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189944134078 0.200843997647 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125698324022 0.132149295362 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78239212536 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 219.290929204 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505586592179 0.48968727796 103% => OK
Word variations: 53.5886214555 55.4138127331 97% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 25.5714285714 23.380412469 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.4808308366 59.4972553346 38% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.214285714 141.124799967 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 23.380412469 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.674092028746 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 54.0630486832 51.4728631049 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.16101694915 1.64882698954 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347596646409 0.391690518653 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.142885282749 0.123202303941 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0608249117679 0.077325440228 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.610896697756 0.547984918172 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0870096303662 0.149214159877 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164556989108 0.161403998019 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750595990248 0.0892212321368 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.343446321462 0.385218514788 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0173581112883 0.0692045440612 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249973928175 0.275328986314 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424729520115 0.0653680567796 65% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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