A nation should definitely require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter the college.There exists many uncertainities and irregularities if it fails to do so.Many of students are even deprived of a fair chance to even appear in critical examinations which can even change there future once and for all.But still there exists many conditions where students are not able to appear in exams and if they do so they do not perform very well in these exams,then whats the point of even appearing in exams?Also there should not be a case of bifurcating the students on basis of there following specialization courses.They should not be divided on the basis of students goin for commerce or engineering or medical.
This is a problem wherein urban area school nearly teach the same cuuriculum certified by national board but rural schools are not able to deliver the same content to there students solely because of the reason of lack of resources and they are certified by state board.As a result they are not able to cope up with the speed in colleges where they come face to face with urban school going students.Also there should be a common exam wherein student can choose the field of study depending upon the cutoff of the examination.
Consider the case of Ab De Villiers, a very famous cricketer of South Africa.He was very inclined towards taking cricket as his future.But his father was quite adamant of him taking engineering as his subject.He got admission into a graduate school and what happened next?He left the school midway.He was not able to withstand the pressure of the subject and started making his career in cricket.Had he not been playing cricket and would have pursued his career in engineering he wont have been able to do such great in engineering.
Had there would have been a common exam in which he couldn't have done great and his father would have stopped dreaming about his son being an engineer.
Its very important for a nation to to agree on a general consensus and stop bifurcating its students on the basis of there career.Students take some decisions in a flash and later regret.So its very important for them to and government to conduct a common exam and give admission to students i their interested branch if they clear their cutoff.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 396.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86363636364 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73961386591 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502525252525 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 79.0 23.0359550562 343% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 199.123479279 60.3974514979 330% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 385.2 118.986275619 324% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 79.2 23.4991977007 337% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.8 5.21951772744 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205871435995 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104226016621 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845810787163 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104226016621 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845810787163 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.1 14.1392134831 291% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.25 48.8420337079 -1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.9 12.1743820225 270% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.78 8.38706741573 129% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 11.8971910112 496% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.6 11.2143820225 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 11.7820224719 501% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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