Whether a nation should follow a nationwide curriculum, has intrigued educationalists, politicians and general multitude for decades. Education being the fundamental instrument, allows the nations to produce human resources who will be driving the future. As a country, we depend on people with wide range of skills such as politicians, economist, traders, engineers, doctors and artists etc. therefore, having a fixed national curriculum will force students to learn those subjects which will not be relevant to them in the future. Thus, as a country we should have the curriculum designed around the career-path of students, even before they enter college.
Having a well-tailored curriculum considering the career of student group allows them to participate actively. The most blatant example, in this case, is class 9th and 10th curriculum of Bihar state schools a province in India before 2010. All the students interested in engineering field(including me) opted for advanced math instead of Biology as an additional subject because the understanding of biology will not help us in class 11th/12th but the understanding of advanced math would and naturally the early understanding of such advanced concepts made our life much easier in class 11th/12th and afterwards in engineering college. However recently, the government had scrapped this additional subject, and all students are required to attend biology. My sister's batch in which most of them are interested in engineering fields do not even attend the biology classes since they have no inclination to pursue career in biology.
A region specific curriculum allows schools to include native language subjects which are important for maintaining the cultural belonging of regional society. This may not appear as a very important concern initially but if we look closely, these languages allows us to share our emotions, understanding of complex life which no other language can depict the exact way. The native language communication bounds us together and makes us feel belonging to our community.
Economically backward students may be at disadvantage if a country implements the same national curriculum. We all know that college admissions do not happen directly, and most of the admissions happen through entrance examination. Suppose, a kid from rich family Rakesh and another kid from a poor family Ramesh studied the same curriculum and after class 12th, both are preparing for medical entrance. Rakesh has plenty of coaching institute(may be best in the country) at his disposal and he is taking all possible help however Ramesh cannot afford the cost of these coaching institute hence have to prepare on his own. We certainly know their results and rankings but consider another key situation, what if Ramesh went through a different curriculum specially designed for engineering, in that case he will have a longer period of time to prepare himself for the test as well as a better chance of securing a seat.
One may however, question the integrity of this novel stand and argue that since most countries already have the national entrance exams for colleges then why shouldn't the countries have a common curriculum before college. One may even think that a nationwide curriculum provides a fair platform for students to compete.However, I disagree with the above stand that we have common examination for colleges, in fact countries have a very specific college entry examinations for example in India we have joint entrance examination(IIT-JEE) for engineering, National medical examination(NEET), Common law entrance examination(CLAT) etc. hence for students planning a career in any of these fields if studied a common curriculum will have to study unnecessary additional subjects which is not going to be useful for them in the future.
Conclusively, A curriculum focused on a particular career path for students will yield a better result for a country as well as allows students the freedom to choose their career-path in their early stage including maintaining the cultural heritage of the regional society.
- The council of Maple County, concerned about the county's becoming overdeveloped, is debating a proposed measure that would prevent the development of existing farmland in the county. But the council is also concerned that such a restriction, by limiting 66
- True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneselfWrite a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and sup 70
- It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In d 58
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.Write a response in which you 83
- It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In d 58
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3460.0 2235.4752809 155% => OK
No of words: 641.0 442.535393258 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39781591264 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0316973083 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04817111227 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 306.0 215.323595506 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477379095164 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 1092.6 704.065955056 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.6612707458 60.3974514979 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.272727273 118.986275619 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1363636364 23.4991977007 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222955521273 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728211089725 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609775818372 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110949570008 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674114396377 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 14.1392134831 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 100.480337079 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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