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It is rightly said - "Children are the future of a nation" .Consequently the future depends on the education these children receive. Education is the pillar of growth for an individual.A student develops his skills on the basis of the training he receives during childhood. Having said that,it is very crucial to determine the plethora of things a child should be taught while in school before he enters college.
While in school or high school,the students have not set their goals and the careers they would like to pursue in the future.They are similar to clay which can be moulded in any shape.In such a situation, the curriculum plays a pivot role in their growth and development.It is important for students to explore their abilities and interests before college for them to decide and focus on the correct field once they enter college.To tackle this situation gracefully,a nation cannot be rigid on the rendering the same curriculum for all the children.The optimum practice could be having some subjects in common for all the students which are vital for an individual growth in collaberation with few optional subjects which the student might want to explore.
For instance, consider the example of ICSE board prevelant in India.It gives the students opportunity to explore various fields like biology,businness management , fashion designing,accounting etc.A student can opt for one of these subjects in each of the high school grades to explore his subject of interest in detail.This has helped a lot of students to achieve clarity of their interest and has served has the first step to achieve their goals.There have been cases wherein students wanted to become a doctor or engineering only because they were toppers and majority of the top-ranking individuals pursue these careers.But the new system of providing with optional subjects helped them choose ecclectic options on the basis of their interest.
Various nations have diverese culture which make them unique.Like in India there are various state boards running and each state board has its own predefined cuuriculum.As we know India is regarded as the country of diversity wherein different cultures thrive together.In such a diverse country it would not be possible to have a static national curriculum.There could be regional languages in each state which students should learn to explore their culture.Maharashtra a state on the west coast of India has Marathi as their regional language and students have a subject to learn and write Marathi.Contrary to this,the east coast has Bengali as their regional language which make it imperial for the state to incorporate it in the curriculum for its important for the new generation to be aware of its culture.
This situation may be applicable to various other nations wherein it would be quixotic to have same national curriculum.
There are various factors that determine the education system.A static education system may not help to solve various situations eccentric to various regions.Having said that, same national curriculum is not the need of the day;instead curriculum should be decided keeping in mind the needs of the society with few things kept in common along with few to be left upon students to decide.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254448398577 0.240241500013 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.179715302491 0.157235817809 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110320284698 0.0880659088768 125% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0213523131673 0.0497285424764 43% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0516014234875 0.0444667217837 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122775800712 0.12292977631 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0320284697509 0.0406280797675 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00088037397 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0409252669039 0.030933414821 132% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.104982206406 0.0997080785238 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0249110320285 0.0249443105267 100% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0124555160142 0.0148568991511 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3303.0 2732.02544248 121% => OK
No of words: 530.0 452.878318584 117% => OK
Chars per words: 6.2320754717 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.58838876751 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.4 0.366273622748 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.311320754717 0.280924506359 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.21320754717 0.200843997647 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122641509434 0.132149295362 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00088037397 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 219.290929204 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479245283019 0.48968727796 98% => OK
Word variations: 56.5750228063 55.4138127331 102% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6194690265 39% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 66.25 23.380412469 283% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 291.322389073 59.4972553346 490% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 412.875 141.124799967 293% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.25 23.380412469 283% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.674092028746 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.94800884956 141% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.21349557522 595% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 97.3820754717 51.4728631049 189% => OK
Elegance: 1.61971830986 1.64882698954 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349687942788 0.391690518653 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.256658079824 0.123202303941 208% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0872471123675 0.077325440228 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.883631135745 0.547984918172 161% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167916735154 0.149214159877 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183017782049 0.161403998019 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548939076844 0.0892212321368 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.283303185066 0.385218514788 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.144415444333 0.0692045440612 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182141213155 0.275328986314 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826511976479 0.0653680567796 126% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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