Education has become a prime necessity for the students to create a bright fututre for themselves. Students choose to study those subjects which they are interested in getting into a carrer path they want to be successful into.
Students of a particular nation are expected to know certain languages for communicating fluently with other people around them and hence basically the national language subject should be made compulsary in study cirriculum. Culture has been a major aspect that has brought people from various regions to a single location. Art, science, mathematics,English, geography and history are the major subjcects that has to be taught to every student of the nation so that they are well versed with the requirements of their culture. Geography and history gives the basic knowledge about the envoirnmental factors, indepth study about the temperatures, the events that occured in past, the amalgamation of countries, the battles fought etc. which is necessary for every student to know these facts that helps them understand how to deal with people around them.
Science has advanced so fast over the previous decades that humans are further expecting an exponential growth in technology. To futher move at a faster pace in developing technology that would help humans work efficiently science as a subject is a must to be taught to students, hence, science should be considered as one of the major subjects as national cirriculum. Students when they get into colleges their aspirations change and every student then choose subjects that are lucrative for getting them high paid jobs. To choose these subjects that would help them fetch lucrative jobs of their liking, the basic subjects like science, mathematics, english etc would help them in long run.
Gaining basic knowledge of particular subjects become a compulsion as it proves to be benificial at later stages to choose lucrative jobs.
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
- "According to a recent report by our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies ac 50
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
- The main benefit of the study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement 50
- Learning is primarily a matter of personal discipline; students cannot be motivated by school or college alone.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position y 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Education has become a prime necessity f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...path they want to be successful into. Students of a particular nation are expe...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , English
...ngle location. Art, science, mathematics,English, geography and history are the major su...
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Line 2, column 681, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...e temperatures, the events that occured in past, the amalgamation of countries, the bat...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...d how to deal with people around them. Science has advanced so fast over the pr...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...k efficiently science as a subject is a must to be taught to students, hence, science s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...lish etc would help them in long run. Gaining basic knowledge of particular su...
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Discourse Markers used:
['hence', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246246246246 0.240241500013 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.18018018018 0.157235817809 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0990990990991 0.0880659088768 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.03003003003 0.0497285424764 60% => OK
Pronouns: 0.045045045045 0.0444667217837 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12012012012 0.12292977631 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0540540540541 0.0406280797675 133% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83512271811 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.045045045045 0.030933414821 146% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0930930930931 0.0997080785238 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.018018018018 0.0249443105267 72% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.033033033033 0.0148568991511 222% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1960.0 2732.02544248 72% => OK
No of words: 307.0 452.878318584 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.38436482085 6.0361032391 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.403908794788 0.366273622748 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.293159609121 0.280924506359 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208469055375 0.200843997647 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13680781759 0.132149295362 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83512271811 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 219.290929204 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527687296417 0.48968727796 108% => OK
Word variations: 54.117917821 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 25.5833333333 23.380412469 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.277244228 59.4972553346 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.333333333 141.124799967 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 23.380412469 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 54.8992942454 51.4728631049 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.64705882353 1.64882698954 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250127165713 0.391690518653 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122629884679 0.123202303941 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0904422884915 0.077325440228 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.576608028416 0.547984918172 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.179473486424 0.149214159877 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108162118394 0.161403998019 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624535410695 0.0892212321368 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.297769216214 0.385218514788 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0632155656681 0.0692045440612 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163983345721 0.275328986314 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059876150487 0.0653680567796 92% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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