"A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college."
Education plays a vital role in shaping our nation. Young minds are the future of our nation and have a major affect on the development of the nation. Proper guidance and education are very important factors to be taken care of to ensure positive development. Identifying and and shaping young talent is the most important issue of all.
A nation consists of a wide range of diversity consisting of a number of states and their relative lifestyles and values. Every state may concentrate on it's own values and students may not be provided with all round education. Poverty is also a major issue seen in different nations. Many people are made inaccessible to quality education because of poverty. Hence, ensuring the same national curriculum for all the students across the nation may be helpful for an all round development without any discretion to a particular field and also caters to accurate measurement of a student's talent for college admissions.
In India, different states have their own exam board with their respective scale of grading and difficulty. This may lead to irregular ranking and and leads to inefficient assessment of a student's capability. A state's average may be very high compared to the other state which has a more strict and complex examination and grading scale. This partial grading system can be removed by adopting the same national curriculum.
Different states may have their own fields of excellence. For example, a state may be known for it's progress in IT sector and another state may be known for it's filmography. This may lead to forcing students to adopt that particular field though they have more capability and interest to excel in other fields. This may lead to loss of proper talent in one field and also appointing less talent into another field. By ensuring the same curriculum, students can be encouraged to discover their interest and talent in every field and take a known and correct decision in college. This also leads to the development of the nation with respect to all the fields.
Encouragement of talent in every field is very much essential for the development of the nation. Today, every nation is emerging in all fields of talent. A fair and impartial assessment of talent should be ensured and people excelling in those fields should be encouraged and should be given the freedom to succeed in their respective fields.Therefore, adopting the same curriculum nation wide is a very inspiring step taken towards development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...e future of our nation and have a major affect on the development of the nation. Proper g...
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Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...nsure positive development. Identifying and and shaping young talent is the most import...
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Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...lso caters to accurate measurement of a students talent for college admissions. In In...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...lty. This may lead to irregular ranking and and leads to inefficient assessment of a st...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...nd leads to inefficient assessment of a students capability. A states average may be ver...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...m to succeed in their respective fields.Therefore, adopting the same curriculum nation wi...
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Line 9, column 383, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...Therefore, adopting the same curriculum nation wide is a very inspiring step taken towards ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, therefore, for example, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 414.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02415458937 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7914596887 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434782608696 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.3232655617 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5454545455 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95454545455 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207718139726 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704308647456 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633180749577 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134278098349 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436339629138 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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