Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
The statement presents a policy that I completely agree, especially nowadays. We are facing several deleterious issues regarding nature and the consequences are happening increasingly - Amazon and Australia wildfire, melting Artic glassiers and the increase of global heat. Human beings since a long time ago, are damaging the planet and only in 21th century are trying to convert all the damage.
Non- governmental organizations, activist people such as Greta Thunberg are increasing and trying to modify our thoughts and more important, the systems where nations are entrenched. One of the topics that we most hear is about how the meat industry is completely prejudicial for the environment. Companies such as the brazilian JBS and american Cargill, is one of the responsibles for a great amount of greenhouse gases emission.
The brazilian company is guilty for a large destruction of Amazon rainforest, which is important not only regarding the fauna and flora diversity, but the essentiality because of the evapotranspiration of the plants. The water released goes to the atmosphere and rivers, influencing the world climate and ocean currents. Also, the use of plants' study that help to discover new kinds of medicines.
The meat industry, for instance, need new regulations to control the greenhouse emission. In Brazil, this company is very important for the economy and is one of the biggest companies that export meat around the world. It is evident that in order for the economic gain, some damage needs to be done, and clearly, the meat industry cannot be rescinded.
Concerning Amazon forest, but others wildness areas are considered, some law must be passed in order to preserve them. Certainly the companies' economy will be affected, but this is crucial for the planet's future. And as everything that we do in our lives, we need to give up on something in order to other prosper.
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- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition 66
- The following appeared in an article written by Dr Karp an anthropologist 50
- On Balmer Island where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation the population increases to 100 000 during the summer months To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians the town council of Balmer Island should limit the numb 58
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition 50
- Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 134, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...n order to preserve them. Certainly the companies economy will be affected, but this is c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 307.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21172638436 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9330817343 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586319218241 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7739568298 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14211075219 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421105839631 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054105047376 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698971966131 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483229902134 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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