Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
The prompts claim that we can usually much more from like-minded people whose those views contradicts our own because disagreement can cause tension, demotivation and impede learning. The given topic is highly contentious because different people may have different opinions and reasons on the topic. some of them go for it, while others can't ague it at all. I agree in the given claims that we can usually learn from much more people whose views we share then from those whose views contradict our own. I have three reasons and examples supporting the given statements are presented in following paragraphs below:
First of all, rule and reguations are most important part of every countries. it have some positive and negetive factors
dippend upon that area. For instance, In dubai, a few decade before it was desert where can't find and person in there, but present time it become the tourists hub and different technology hub. In additional, there are higest building Brug khalifa was made by engineer in this desert that's what each year from different countries people went to there which help uplifting the ecnomic condition of the country. hence, national should pass the rule and regulation to preserve any wilderness area in their natural state.
Secondly, desert are mostly used in different countries like the eletricity generation. for example, In maxico, the desert are used to generate the solar eletricity. In addition, there are more the 70% of eletricity are generate in solar system and 4.5 Kwh eletricity generate in per square km.
Furthermore, the another example that we have taken in south Africa, there are mos tof the place are cover by the desert in past time but now it become thats most resourceful are for solar eletricity generatiion. Thus, if the wildness area that helpful for development of the ecomonics condition then rule and law must be pass.
In summary,the reasons and examples presented support the claim/position that are completely aggreable. The essay highlights the uesd of weaste are for the economic advancement of that countries. The examples of dubai south Africaand maxico are support the given claims. hence, rule and law couldt be pass.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 359.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18662952646 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6413559981 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551532033426 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.6713839894 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.444444444 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9444444444 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.21951772744 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170163764274 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645401164962 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11989585534 0.0758088955206 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828912467231 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082894003674 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.