Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Interesting fact, since the 19th century human action contributed to the extinction of almost thousand animal species in America only. Prompt suggests that any nature reservations that never’ve been altered by human actions should stay in the same way. In my not so humble opinion, I mostly agree with the statement for the following two reasons.
To begin with, it’s justifiable in some particular cases to use these natural wilderness areas for benefits of the local community. As an example, imagine local community which is struggling to sustain theirself with provision and healthcare. The possible solution of their problem is the construction of the highway and subsequent building of the public hospital. Yet the problem is that the local community resides nearby the government protected national park, which forbides any construction in the abut territory. However, such facilities as hospital and the new highway is essential for well-being of people in a local community and constructing them would ameliorate their uneasy condition.In the given example, providing essential goods for people is the paramount task of any government, thus construction should be warranted in the given area.
On the contrary, preserving natural habitats especially of the endangered species contributes to the biodiversity. Indeed, biodiversity is the key in sustaining stable environment. The environment ,in which few species are persists, is more vulnerable for any range of natural calamities or human mistakes. In contrast to the areas where diverse and substantial numbers of animals exists. Furthermore flexibility of the environment is the key for nurturing and preserving any type of living entities. For instance, in the area where consumption chain of carnivorous and herbivorous animals have been wildly disrupted, by termination of one of the species in the chain, could be easily abated if the broad range of the other species are living in the same area, which they can substitute the terminated ones. Thus, given example illustrates the importance of sustaining biodiversity and it’s conducive effects on the nature itself.
Another strong point for protecting wild landsites could be their potential in becoming prominent touristic site. In that case, preservation of such land not only it contributes to the biodiversity but also provides additional funding for the government or local municipality. For example, take the case of South Africa which started to preserve their wilderness in the midst of the 20th century, and right now the total contribution of these lands as the prominent touristic sites to the GDP of the South Africa is more than a thirty five percent. One can infer from the example, that the protecting natural habitats of animal species could be lucrative and could contribute to the economy of the nation.
In conclusion, for the above stated reasons nations should protect their any remaining wilderness areas. Neverthelss, in some particular instances such decisions should be deliberately considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, on the contrary, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2592.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50318471338 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01266179697 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532908704883 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 816.3 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.870823473 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.428571429 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52380952381 5.21951772744 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20460058685 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617471950734 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417530728381 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120312196274 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397511545487 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 100.480337079 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.