Every nation should focus on preserving their natural resources for the sake of sustainability or the conservation of environment. If we use the remaining areas for the business and money that will give the benefit for short term but ultimately it will ruin the natural environmental condition and we have to suffer for longer term. I strongly support the argument about each nation should have to pass the laws to preserve the remaining wilderness areas in their natural state rather than use for economic gain.
First, recently I read an oped in New- yorker about the lack of space for building the apartment for public because of already taken all land for commercial purpose. People there in Hongkong live in a small one room flat where even kitchen and toilet are in same place and very expensive even to buy to those kind of apartment to live if the government of Hongkong prior think about these kind of circumstances and preserve the land those kind of situation never be experience by people.
We all know that day by day our living environment are deteriorating and we human being are major responsible for this. In world wide scenario, because of industrilization, environment are highly polluted because of toxic chemical spread out in the atmosphere. Not only for human, wild animal are also serving same condition because of our unfriendly activities. SO many animal like Tiger, one horn rhino are being extinct day by day, if it is continue happening; it is clear that our future generation will not got chance to see those endanger animal. If we can able to preserve the wilderness area, that will help to support to maintain the ecosystem balance and will provide food and shelter for those endanger animal and all plants as well as helps to maintain the livelihood of human being.
Government of China, recently declare the 300 million hectare land for the conservation and will not use for hundred years. That is a great announcement and will help to support environmental conservation and get benefit by future generation.
IN conclusion, it is mandatory to declare a areas to be preserve in state for the sake of people, environment, ecosystem, wild animal and for plant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
...place and very expensive even to buy to those kind of apartment to live if the government ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...overnment of Hongkong prior think about these kind of circumstances and preserve the land ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
... of circumstances and preserve the land those kind of situation never be experience by peo...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...eing are major responsible for this. In world wide scenario, because of industrilization, ...
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Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
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Suggestion: continued
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...ear that our future generation will not got chance to see those endanger animal. If...
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Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...r the conservation and will not use for hundred years. That is a great announcement and...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a area' or simply 'areas'?
Suggestion: a area; areas
... conclusion, it is mandatory to declare a areas to be preserve in state for the sake of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, as for, as to, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94339622642 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80224687143 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517520215633 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5591290717 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.076923077 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5384615385 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272327456886 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106823134453 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982956808504 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160583936792 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10307498892 0.0667264976115 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.