Mankind have dominated Earth for many centuries. Over the time they have made so much success with the building the world they wanted. But these is done at the cost of the natural surroundings and wilderness, which has been the home of not just humans but also other species. Earth has provided all the things necessary for the survival of our race. But now the very Earth is in danger. All those roads, stadiums, buildings, movie theaters, etc have starting to create problem. The increased construction requires space which is taken from the wilderness that is available around the world. But these space is limited just like any other natural resources in the world. Therefore there is strong need of the laws that would protect these wilderness from the world.
Due to the increased construction there is a increase in the number of tree cut down. Forest are converted to the large cosmopolitan cities. The preservation of the forest is absolutely necessary. Forest are cut not for the purpose of building but also for a very crucial product available from the trees, wood. Wood is used almost at every point in our life, from the cradle to the coffin everything is build of the wood. Therefore, it is absolutely necessary the cut of these trees should be controlled.
All the life in the world are important for the constant survival of the planet. All the countries in the world have laws that protect the human. But the current scenario of the world we have laws to protect humans from the other contemporary species in the world, but there are very few laws that protect animals from the gruesome act of the humans. Animals are either kept in zoo or they live in the wilderness. If the government condone the destruction of the wilderness animals will have no place to live. This will result in the extinction of the species, animals invading the homes of the nearby villages, etc.
Destruction of the wilderness has also created the problem of "Global Warming". More and more tress are cut which leads to the disturbance of natural cycle of climate. Because of that there is also increase temperature and other climate problems which in turn create existential crises for mankind.
Laws should be there for the protection of wilderness. Introduction of these laws are not enough but should be also implement at proper scale. If we don't do something to save the remaining wilderness then our survival will also be in question. Global community in the world should encourage all the government in the world to incorporate stringent laws to protect the wilderness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 671, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...y other natural resources in the world. Therefore there is strong need of the laws that w...
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Line 1, column 733, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this wilderness' or 'these wildernesses'?
Suggestion: this wilderness; these wildernesses
...ong need of the laws that would protect these wilderness from the world. Due to the increased...
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Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... to the increased construction there is a increase in the number of tree cut down...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...ties. The preservation of the forest is absolutely necessary. Forest are cut not for the purpose of ...
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Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
... is build of the wood. Therefore, it is absolutely necessary the cut of these trees should be contro...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...but there are very few laws that protect animals from the gruesome act of the hum...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... in zoo or they live in the wilderness. If the government condone the destruction ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ction of the wilderness has also created the problem of 'Global Warming&apos...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion of wilderness. Introduction of these laws are not enough but should be also i...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ould be also implement at proper scale. If we dont do something to save the remain...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e also implement at proper scale. If we dont do something to save the remaining wild...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2156.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 439.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91116173121 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67256332673 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44874715262 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6936983147 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.0 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6785714286 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 5.21951772744 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108778341492 0.243740707755 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316255543825 0.0831039109588 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298802281946 0.0758088955206 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065668621816 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318874273857 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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