One can say that many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws. In some sense, this argument is reasonable in that laws are not the fundamental tool for managing people.
One can say that many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws. In some sense, this argument is reasonable in that laws are not the fundamental tool for managing people. However, I still believe that many problems can be managed by legal system.
Of course, laws cannot change what is in people’s hearts or mind, so it seems that regulation by laws is not a fundamental solution to any problem. Unless we can alter individual’s innate perspective or thought, a government never free the danger from violation. As a common example, we can easily observe people who break the traffic laws despite of the series of educations, monitoring, and fines, and this illustrates people always have possibility to commit crime if they want.
However, laws can regulate people behavior with firm restrictions and regulations. Laws forbid a ton of unacceptable behave in the society such as murder or robbing and give penalty accordance with seriousness of each crime. Consequently, normal people cannot but behave in accordance with legal requirements, in the meanwhile only few commit crimes with high risk. In this regard, laws are the most powerful tool to maintain social stability.
Moreover, legal system is effective to form ideal society which ensures equality and welfare. In modern society with capitalism where everything works in the law of money, most problems originated from its innate inequality aspects. In this situation, legal system guarantees fair competition by forbidding unjust manipulation, confirms minimum level of living by giving subsidy. These systems bridge the gap between the rich and the poor and warrant that anyone can climb of the social strata, suggesting promising implication to solve modern problems.
In sum, despite its limitation, laws are the most effective way to set boundary of people’s behavior and engender equal social system. Therefore, we can say that laws and legal system are the promising keys for faced problems in modern society.
- Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic team. 76
- All college students should take a public speaking course that teaches how to speak well in front of many people before graduation. 83
- Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country. 66
- People learn more by watching television than by reading books. 65
- Although innovations such as video, computers, and the internet seem to offer schools improved methods for instructing students, these technologies all too often distract from real learning. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ental tool for managing people. However, I still believe that many problems can b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 318.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31761006289 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8835312007 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578616352201 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5841207623 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6875 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418633068219 0.243740707755 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148644487758 0.0831039109588 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172972018029 0.0758088955206 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270508844987 0.150359130593 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.28536597139 0.0667264976115 428% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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