"People are too quick to take action; instead they should stop to think of the possible consequences of what they might do."
In general it is the nature of the people to act for a sudden situation immediately without
thinking about the possible outcomes of the action.If they stop for a moment and think about what is gonna happen after they react there is a possibility that result will be in a expected manner.
Because most of the times immediate action leads to unpredictable outcome.
Let's get into an example we say in daily.In present fastmoving generation and it's lifestyle,people work relentlessly .This may lead to a stressful mindset which we can generally call frustration.A jaded mentality in short.
Daily routine of a person his job,his activities may have a created more impact on one's mindset.His thinking abilities are getting detoriated.All he needs is a peaceful situation at any instant and doesn't hesitate to go for extremes without actually not considering the later affects.This may lead to a breakdown in his demeanor because he may not be able to take the later affects.
However,this is not true in every circumstance.There are many situations for which a person should be ready and well trained to take proper decisions on spot.This can be explained with some examples.During the audit of a company where people who are in higher positions should act accordingly in instance.Stock markets is a place where trade and exchanges had to be done in seconds of time.By the time we sit and think about the consequences the person have already incurred losses.For a batsman who is on the field ,he should react instantaneously before the ball removes the bails.
Thus in short people, should have a clear cut idea about when they shoud react and respond for a situation.They should know the differences about the emotional imbalance situations which need time to find a solution and work related situations which may demand instant decisive making quality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, however, if, may, second, so, thus, well, in general, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 305.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11475409836 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10686836109 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593442622951 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 23.0359550562 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.850465504 60.3974514979 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 260.0 118.986275619 219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.8333333333 23.4991977007 216% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.1666666667 5.21951772744 271% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172290829785 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867672683415 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781560418187 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825413519653 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808261495227 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.1 14.1392134831 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 48.8420337079 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 12.1743820225 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.38706741573 124% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 11.2143820225 196% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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