People most respect the powerful not when they exercise their power, but when they refrain from exercising it.
Write an essay in which you develop and support a position on the statement above.In writing your essay,you should consider both when the statement may be true and when it may be false
In history, the people that possesses great power finds themselves in a peculiar relationship with their own power and often struggle between using the power or taking restraint measures, at times utilizing the very power itself does good to millions and potentially change the course of the human history for the better, yet there are also countless examples where the power and its executer deal tremendous detriment to a people, a nation, or the whole world. The sword of Damocles that perpetually hangs upon them, questioning them when or whether to exercise the power they hold as they wish on other people or entities. However, refraining from the abuse of might always keep its owner in the upper hand, since both misuse of power and excessive use of power expose the owner to grave existential danger and as a result, they will also bear an unholy characterization in the history books and also will be despised by succeeding generations.
People tend to have respect for those who exercise unparalleled restraint during hours of peril. At the height of the cold war, the Cuban missile crisis, president Kennedy announces the US will blockade all ships coming from the Soviet Union to Cuba as a result of the Soviet Union setting up a nuclear missile site in America’s doorstep in Cuba, days letter the situation has seriously exacerbated after then Chairman of the U.S.S.R declares it an act of aggression by the United States. Followed by the death of a US spy plane pilot a nuclear-armed Soviet submarine was hit by a depth-charge from a US navy vessel, with the consent of two Soviet commanding officer,a nuclear missiles might have been launched targeting US soil if it weren't for the tantamount courage and supreme bravery presented by Vasili Arkhipov, second in command. It was his dissent, that saves billions from the absolute abyss of a nuclear fallout and he acted by restraining the very might that ensures mutual destruction. For this he will always be remembered by the world as the man that truly saves the World. In the wake of the crisis, while unbridgeable differences in terms of political ideology or view towards democracy still exists even today, both sides chose to exercise that same restraint and also the not shy away from the responsibility to mankind and its future prospects for decades, even hundreds of years to come, so that one day the citizens of both countries or even the world could sit together in one room to discuss that one overriding topic of the human history, world peace, which hundreds of generations that survived before us dreamt of and prayed upon.
One of the founding fathers of the United States, George Washington, after leading countless battles with the British empire, was elected first President of the United States. As a monumental figure at the time and also now, he could have simply clinged on to that unbounded power with no one voicing objections. Instead, he did not do what numerous tyrants and emperors did throughout the history, which is to rule on top of the existing laws and be the sole ruler of one Kingdom or empire, he helped nurture the greatest social experiment of the world history to date, the infant republic and democracy of the United States of America, a congress elected by the people, a supreme court independent of the executive branch and a government for the people, by the people and of the people. Hypothetically if he chose to rule as a King as their enemy at the time the British monarchy did, the monument that is history’s greatest mentions would have a much smaller and lesser place for him and it is for that reason, refraining from waving tremendous unlimited might that he is forever remembered and respected by the citizens of the world as he is one of them, returning to them as a tobacco farm owner when his two terms as the first president of the United States came to the end.
It is just priceless when the powerful know that when to exercise power and when not to. Savvy practitioners know deep down they’ve got ahold of the power even if they don’t present it to the world. History will always allocate a lousy reputation for people that’s eager to showcase their might and brings those for which power resides and internalizes as their doctrines and principles to the foreground.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, still, then, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.3162921348 221% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 103.0 58.6224719101 176% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3596.0 2235.4752809 161% => OK
No of words: 739.0 442.535393258 167% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86603518268 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.21388093824 4.55969084622 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69460233541 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 359.0 215.323595506 167% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485791610284 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 1139.4 704.065955056 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 161.551075515 60.3974514979 267% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 224.75 118.986275619 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.1875 23.4991977007 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211785656054 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829272152525 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897951396692 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158991444053 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100435144112 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.6 14.1392134831 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 48.8420337079 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.38706741573 118% => OK
difficult_words: 186.0 100.480337079 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.