As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , technology
...volving around us in our day to day life,technology and human thinking are the best partner...
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Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , however
...e best partners I can ever imagine about,however this is true that we rely more on techn...
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Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
... that we rely more on technology rather then believing on our own abilities.Technolo...
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Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Technology
...her then believing on our own abilities.Technology releases time for us which we can spend...
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Line 1, column 435, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , technology
...th and our day to day habits and routine,technology gives us wings so that we can actually ...
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Line 1, column 526, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...implement our imaginary ideas and dreams,it helps us to accomplish the impossible s...
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Line 1, column 592, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , like
... the impossible scenarios and situations,like reaching to our people who are in need ...
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Line 1, column 681, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...miles ago within 2-3 hours is impossible,but technology makes is possible with a gre...
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Line 1, column 732, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...logy makes is possible with a great ease,this is the magic of technology which we sho...
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Line 1, column 792, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Pros
...f technology which we should appreciate.Pros and cons arises for every term,there is...
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Line 1, column 827, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...iate.Pros and cons arises for every term,there is no solution for that,we can say it i...
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Line 1, column 857, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...every term,there is no solution for that,we can say it is needed to make a balance ...
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Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...t technology is the masterkey to success,it can ensure that with the help of a litt...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , also
... lot of things in a very short time span,also after getting a good success,it encoura...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...e span,also after getting a good success,it encourages us to do more better and use...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...g a good success,it encourages us to do more better and use more technology and try to inve...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , technology
... make our life more comfortable and easy,technology have given us enourmous things which on...
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Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , like
...man thinking and human force cannot give,like travelling to miles in some hours,getti...
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Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , getting
...e,like travelling to miles in some hours,getting hard cash anywhere and anytime,getting ...
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Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , getting
...s,getting hard cash anywhere and anytime,getting food delivered to our homes which perso...
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Line 3, column 699, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...which connects people all over the world,it makes us connected to each of of our fa...
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Line 3, column 730, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
...the world,it makes us connected to each of of our family friend and office everyday a...
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Line 3, column 765, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...each of of our family friend and office everyday and everytime,technology helps us to co...
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Line 3, column 787, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , technology
...friend and office everyday and everytime,technology helps us to complete our life and this ...
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Line 3, column 895, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Who
...because of extraordinary human thinking.Who would have imagined,a century ago that ...
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Line 3, column 918, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...y human thinking.Who would have imagined,a century ago that any one can even make ...
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Line 3, column 938, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
... would have imagined,a century ago that any one can even make electronic vehicles which...
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Line 3, column 1005, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , petrol
...ronic vehicles which will not use diesel,petrol or even CNG.One of the most important i...
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Line 3, column 1025, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: One
... will not use diesel,petrol or even CNG.One of the most important invention of Tech...
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Line 3, column 1129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , instead
...sing the human technology to the fullest,instead of taking it in a negative way we shoul...
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Line 3, column 1151, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ogy to the fullest,instead of taking it in a negative way we should appreciate the technology and...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... in extraordinary results and inventions,it is contributing in every sector,wherthe...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , wherther
...tions,it is contributing in every sector,wherther it is education,health care,country eco...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , health
...in every sector,wherther it is education,health care,country economy and industrialisat...
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , country
...tor,wherther it is education,health care,country economy and industrialisation,it is mak...
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...re,country economy and industrialisation,it is making people realise its importnce ...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , using
...ple realise its importnce in every field,using the technology wrapping inside human th...
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Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...lise that only technology can do nothing,it needs the power of human thinking which...
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Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , in
...ich can implement the real time scenario,in the education field we are able to see ...
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Line 5, column 512, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , study
... we are able to see many more equipments,study materials and even virtual professors w...
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Line 5, column 611, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , in
...ildren and students to understand better,in the health care sector we have many inv...
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Line 5, column 698, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ons in which with the help of technology doctors are able to create test tube bab...
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Line 5, column 801, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , adding
...tile couples to live a happy parent hood,adding to this we can also make organ transpla...
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Line 5, column 869, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...make organ transplants which saves life.This was about the magics created in the hea...
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Line 5, column 944, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...n the health care and educational sector,if we see about the country economy,each a...
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Line 5, column 980, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , each
...ctor,if we see about the country economy,each and every country is using technology i...
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Line 5, column 1078, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , country
...other to make their country economy grow,country economy is all about the residences of ...
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Line 5, column 1153, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...esidences of the country and their wages,because of technology,more and more unemployed ...
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Line 5, column 1175, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , more
...ry and their wages,because of technology,more and more unemployed people are getting ...
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Line 5, column 1336, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...e take the example of industrialiasation,I can say Dubai is the best example,here ...
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Line 5, column 1372, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , here
...tion,I can say Dubai is the best example,here they have merged 2-3 technologies to cr...
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Line 5, column 1494, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ifa which is really a beautiful creation and not in the hands of human things onl...
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Line 5, column 1537, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , technology
...nd not in the hands of human things only,technology is the must. In one way technology i...
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Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , speed
...In one way technology is giving us wings,speed and also the power to create magic but ...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , it
... power to create magic but in other hand,it is destroying our natural habits and ro...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , earlier
...estroying our natural habits and routine,earlier we used to take good food,leafy vegetab...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , leafy
...outine,earlier we used to take good food,leafy vegetables and fruits to gain immune sy...
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Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , but
...ain immune system and get a healthy body,but now technology is so much eveolved that...
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Line 7, column 482, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Technology
...many disasterous and dangerous diseases.Technology have made our life so easy that we do n...
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Line 7, column 620, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...harmful situations it is creating for us,it is making us blind.Human is the most it...
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Line 7, column 643, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Human
...s creating for us,it is making us blind.Human is the most itelligent creature and is ...
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Line 7, column 730, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...pable of utilising the 100% of its brain,but because of the term called technology,i...
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Line 7, column 772, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , it
...ut because of the term called technology,it is making us lazy,people dun think abou...
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Line 7, column 793, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...m called technology,it is making us lazy,people dun think about any new thing,these day...
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Line 7, column 830, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , these
...azy,people dun think about any new thing,these days they only think what technology ma...
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Line 7, column 900, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: In
...at technology makes them to think about.In news it is very trending that world war...
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Line 7, column 963, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...ding that world war 3 can happen anytime,we cannot predict anything about it and th...
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Line 7, column 1038, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...t and this would be the mass destruction,if we take this concept,people or say the ...
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Line 7, column 1062, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...mass destruction,if we take this concept,people or say the rulers are only tring to tak...
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Line 7, column 1163, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , how
...ppurtunity to show how powerful they are,how much powerful weapons they have and the...
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Line 7, column 1239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
... and they can use againts their opponent,but they are not thinking as human,they are...
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Line 7, column 1274, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...onent,but they are not thinking as human,they are not thinking about humanity,they ar...
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Line 7, column 1311, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...man,they are not thinking about humanity,they are not thinking how much destruction,l...
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Line 7, column 1354, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , loss
...ey are not thinking how much destruction,loss and loneliness it can create to the who...
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Line 9, column 34, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , technology
...ld. Atlast concluding the whole topic,technology is really a power to the human imaginat...
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Line 9, column 115, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'utilise'
Suggestion: utilise
...n imaginations but it should definitely utilised in a proper manner and human should ne...
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Line 9, column 124, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...tions but it should definitely utilised in a proper manner and human should never consider everyt...
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Line 9, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...d definitely utilised in a proper manner and human should never consider everythi...
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Line 9, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...should never consider everything granted,there should be new learning everyday,everymo...
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Line 9, column 224, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ng granted,there should be new learning everyday,everymoment.If we will learn more, we c...
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Line 9, column 232, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , everymoment
...ed,there should be new learning everyday,everymoment.If we will learn more, we can implement...
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Line 9, column 245, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: If
...ld be new learning everyday,everymoment.If we will learn more, we can implement mo...
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Line 9, column 289, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , we
...e will learn more, we can implement more,we can invent more,we should understand th...
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Line 9, column 308, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , we
...we can implement more,we can invent more,we should understand that human thinking i...
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Line 9, column 384, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: We
...nking is as important as the technology.We rely more on technology to solve opur p...
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Line 9, column 485, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , our
...d also try to understand our inner power,our real strength.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 49.0 19.5258426966 251% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 38.0 12.4196629213 306% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 52.0 14.8657303371 350% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 33.0 11.3162921348 292% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 117.0 33.0505617978 354% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 102.0 58.6224719101 174% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4877.0 2235.4752809 218% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 947.0 442.535393258 214% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14994720169 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.54737461389 4.55969084622 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30973468401 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 395.0 215.323595506 183% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.417106652587 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1574.1 704.065955056 224% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 25.0 6.24550561798 400% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 189.0 23.0359550562 820% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 376.085841265 60.3974514979 623% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 975.4 118.986275619 820% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 189.4 23.4991977007 806% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.2 5.21951772744 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 86.0 7.80617977528 1102% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208125992285 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142600451912 0.0831039109588 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256003248104 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142600451912 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256003248104 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 97.5 14.1392134831 690% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -128.82 48.8420337079 -264% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 27.4 7.92365168539 346% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 78.2 12.1743820225 642% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.38 8.38706741573 195% => OK
difficult_words: 202.0 100.480337079 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 11.8971910112 496% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 77.6 11.2143820225 692% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 78.0 11.7820224719 662% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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