As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In asserting that more reliance on technology to solve problems leads to depreciation in ability of humans to think for themselves, the speaker failed to acknowledge other diverse issues-requiring thinking to solve- aside technology which confronts humans on daily basis. Nevertheless, I agree with the statement only to the extent that deterioration of human minds might occur when “only” technology issues are considered. In order cases as will be elucidated in the points below, it won’t be so.
Due to the ambiguous nature of the statement “the ability of human to think for its self wi...
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Thanks for the rating. This
Thanks for the rating. This creates need for more hard work. Point 6 is very much achievable and that's my target.
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 567 350
No. of Characters: 2917 1500
No. of Different Words: 296 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.88 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.145 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.879 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 219 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 161 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 121 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 82 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.958 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.248 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.428 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.066 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are huge demands'?
Suggestion: there are huge demands
...ying to get better technology services, there is huge demands on producing more sophisticated machine...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'of course', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.264 0.240241500013 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.1664 0.157235817809 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.072 0.0880659088768 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0592 0.0497285424764 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0368 0.0444667217837 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1344 0.12292977631 109% => OK
Participles: 0.048 0.0406280797675 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02657185464 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0576 0.030933414821 186% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0592 0.0997080785238 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0192 0.0249443105267 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0224 0.0148568991511 151% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3586.0 2732.02544248 131% => OK
No of words: 564.0 452.878318584 125% => OK
Chars per words: 6.35815602837 6.0361032391 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87326216964 4.58838876751 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.409574468085 0.366273622748 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.306737588652 0.280924506359 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.230496453901 0.200843997647 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.166666666667 0.132149295362 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02657185464 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Unique words: 312.0 219.290929204 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.48968727796 113% => OK
Word variations: 70.9066017163 55.4138127331 128% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6194690265 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8888888889 23.380412469 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9872024359 59.4972553346 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.814814815 141.124799967 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 23.380412469 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.674092028746 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 51.5626477541 51.4728631049 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.7012195122 1.64882698954 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.535318706535 0.391690518653 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.079458508774 0.123202303941 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0649094717456 0.077325440228 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.442255928658 0.547984918172 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.189534425367 0.149214159877 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165607601328 0.161403998019 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108044689118 0.0892212321368 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.407111889655 0.385218514788 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0730300809537 0.0692045440612 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.374315742521 0.275328986314 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662058524046 0.0653680567796 101% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.30420353982 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.5995575221 162% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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