As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
times New Roman";color:#222222">The writer states as technology is becoming integral part of life, human being’s self-reliance is decreasing. In present times, technology has been embedded to routine life. From a 2-year to an experienced person are all surrounded by modern inventions and becoming more and more dependent on them for their daily activities. if they are deprived of these gadgets for a day, the will turn into ichthys out of water.
times New Roman";color:#222222">A 30-something shop keeper will spend her entire day sliding merchandise items over barcode reader to input the selling price into the computer software. The software then sums up the prices to determine the amount to be paid. The shopkeeper than enter the cash paid into the system to calculate the difference. she uses this to pay the change to her customer. now if her computer malfunctions and if no calculator is available, she will be stuck up in totaling the bill. And it is likely she might end up making errors since she has been totally dependent on processing of the device, might not be sharp enough in calculations anymore.
times New Roman";color:#222222">A teenager’s morning routine would be visiting his Facebook account to check whose birthday it is. On his way to school, he would grab chocolates from nearby store and will maintain his popularity amongst his classmates. now, if he gets blocked out his account for a few days, he may also loose track of his best friend’s birthday.
times New Roman";color:#222222">A six-year-old girl would spend considerable amount her time playing tea-set games on iPad. now if she was born before the advent of these devices, rather than playing on these games sitting idly on a chair, she would have been running around her room imaging entire situation in her mind. Her guests would be her stuff toys, who in her world, would be chatting with her while sitting on chairs and having snacks. now, it would not be wrong, if it is believed such games are preventing creative thinking in young ones.
times New Roman";color:#222222">Very limited people today are strong enough in mental math. How many people would even remember what 13 times 4 is, as everyone uses calculator. limited people would still remember which element is Hg since it can always be googled. rather than celebrating the moment, people concentrate more on taking picture to create Insta stories.
times New Roman"; color:#222222">these scenarios are relatable to everyone. As technology is becoming vital part of simple activities, it is taking over people’s ability to think, calculate, memorize, recall and imagine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2310.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 426.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42253521127 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.45633644542 2.79657885939 159% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1573337498 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.434782609 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5217391304 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.60869565217 5.21951772744 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0756184990947 0.243740707755 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273240316692 0.0831039109588 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312428106545 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0504854696091 0.150359130593 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386282352313 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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