As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The world has been emerging in terms of technology now a days. So many advancements done to make the lives of people more comfortable and easy-going. There are so many inventions done for betterment of people. Technologies are developed just to make their lives better. It does not decline the ability of humans to think for themselves.
For example, calculator is invented to make the calculation of large number faster and more efficient compare to human calculation. This does not imply that ability of humans to calculate by themselves will be gone gradually.
Moreover, mobile phone is invented to connect with people all over the world. It rescued us from remembering the mobile numbers of people or noting it down into a book or a diary. It can be used for many reasons now a days. This has made our lives easier than before and it has nothing to do with our thinking ability.
There are so many appliances like washing machine, refrigerator, air conditioner are invented to cut the work load of civilization and make living better.
Although, technology has made humans lazy in certain ways, it doesn’t mean that we have lost the power of thinking by ourselves. Technologies are developed after human started thinking in different ways and it is still growing because humans are still thinking how to make lives ever better.
World is relying more and more on technologies to be free from unnecessary work load. If humans would have worse thinking abilities than further developed would have been stopped. Definitely we are dependent on technologies but it has not taken our power to think of ourselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...as been emerging in terms of technology now a days. So many advancements done to make the ...
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Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...een emerging in terms of technology now a days. So many advancements done to make the ...
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Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... diary. It can be used for many reasons now a days. This has made our lives easier than be...
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Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ry. It can be used for many reasons now a days. This has made our lives easier than be...
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Line 11, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to be free from unnecessary work load. If humans would have worse thinking abilit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, still, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 272.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00735294118 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80134514155 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525735294118 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9585038462 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.1176470588 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41176470588 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232411465549 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783430603768 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491613768809 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11611006194 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572133587556 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.