As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Technology is an inevitable part of human being now a days. With the evolution of humans, technology has also evolved a lot. Earlier generation used to depend on themselves and work according to their own plans and decisions. But with the advancements in technology, mankind has turned its depenence to technology. With the increasing involvement of technology in day to day life, humans started believing on technology rather than themselves. Now the situation has arrived when human fear to follow themselves and follow the technology. This surely has deteriorated the thinking capability of humans.
Technology has surely made our life easier. It has helped us in doing tedious tasks in just a blink of an eye. The best example of this is computer. Everyone is well aware of the advantages, but these advantages has overshadowed its disadvantages. With the passage of time computers are becoming more and more powerful reducing human work to a very small level.The reduction is so tremendous that now humans have stopped thinking about problems which are solved by computers. They blindly follow the results provided by computer, thus, limiting their efforts and leading to deterioration in their intellectual abilities.
Another example which can be stated in the context is the use of mobile phones. With the arrival of new applications and softwares running on these mobile phone, earlier habit of remembering phone numbers, keeping notes and remembering birthdays is slowly vanishing. Earlier people used to maintain a diary for keeping important notes, used to remember phone numbers, but now everything is superceded by mobile phone. Now we dont even know our phone number, we dont know our daily schedule. We depend upon daily reminders provided by phone for some meeting or birthday. This has reduced our capability to think and keep important things memorised.
Technology is surely a great benefit to human race. But it is always said that "Excess is dangerous". Excess of anything in our life has always proved to be dangerous. This is true in this case also. Excessive dependence on technology, always looking towards technolgy for doing our petty jobs is proving to be harmful for our human race. This is slowly leading humans to lose their mental abilities and making humans weak.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...gy is an inevitable part of human being now a days. With the evolution of humans, technolo...
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Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...s an inevitable part of human being now a days. With the evolution of humans, technolo...
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Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ducing human work to a very small level.The reduction is so tremendous that now hum...
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Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...g is superceded by mobile phone. Now we dont even know our phone number, we dont kno...
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Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... we dont even know our phone number, we dont know our daily schedule. We depend upon...
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Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...be dangerous. This is true in this case also. Excessive dependence on technology, al...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'thus', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240963855422 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.207228915663 0.157235817809 132% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0867469879518 0.0880659088768 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0578313253012 0.0497285424764 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.055421686747 0.0444667217837 125% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101204819277 0.12292977631 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0963855421687 0.0406280797675 237% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.88706548711 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.033734939759 0.030933414821 109% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0746987951807 0.0997080785238 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00240963855422 0.0249443105267 10% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00722891566265 0.0148568991511 49% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2313.0 2732.02544248 85% => OK
No of words: 372.0 452.878318584 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.21774193548 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.39247311828 0.366273622748 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.301075268817 0.280924506359 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206989247312 0.200843997647 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.166666666667 0.132149295362 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88706548711 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 219.290929204 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540322580645 0.48968727796 110% => OK
Word variations: 59.8208752342 55.4138127331 108% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6194690265 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.88 23.380412469 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3603278677 59.4972553346 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.52 141.124799967 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.88 23.380412469 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.28 0.674092028746 42% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 44.9875268817 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.36842105263 1.64882698954 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374930572924 0.391690518653 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0994474705157 0.123202303941 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0811739369191 0.077325440228 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.42934392239 0.547984918172 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.109030032235 0.149214159877 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120693323561 0.161403998019 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737007005468 0.0892212321368 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.294286400862 0.385218514788 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0930008554235 0.0692045440612 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250682921475 0.275328986314 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833221853031 0.0653680567796 127% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88274336283 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.