As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to
think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your
reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you
should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain
how these considerations shape your position.
The world it is getting more advanced as Days Go By. Date, are introduced to the people we are now in a situation where people are using driverless cars and even using robots to clean the house or cook food. Although all these Technologies help to make our life easier but being so dependent in these is a a good thing or not is something to consider.
Many innovations are inspired from day to day problems that people face. For example, calculators are used for high level calculations, vaccines are created to prevent illness, automobiles are used to make travelling easier. People being dependent on the above mentioned and many other Technologies doesn't really affect their thinking ability, if used in situations where it is difficult for people to do.
The problem comes when all these technologies are used for doing menial task such as doing simple addition or cleaning the house and so on. Doing so induces laziness in people and also deteriorates their thinking ability. There are arguments like there are brilliant minds behind these technologies and that people will continue to get involved as improvements are being made. But the point is that, only a small part of the population are involved while the rest belong to the group who purely uses this to make their life easier.
There are many examples to support my point of view. One of it is digital communication. In this era of digitization, people can easily communicate with their loved one or even strangers. Using different methods like mobile phone, social media and so on. While it can help to provide more time for people to communicate during their busy schedule, but doing so prevent themselves from meeting in real life which is very crucial for social beings like human. This can severely affect their emotional thinking ability.
In addition the above mentioned example, we can find many more from our day to day life if we look closely enough. When something is given to us in a platter, is in human nature to take it as granted such that it is very hard to adapt to a life without it.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...sier but being so dependent in these is a a good thing or not is something to consi...
^^^
Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...sier but being so dependent in these is a a good thing or not is something to con...
^
Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...sier but being so dependent in these is a a good thing or not is something to consi...
^^^
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e mentioned and many other Technologies doesnt really affect their thinking ability, i...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...heir emotional thinking ability. In addition the above mentioned example, we can fin...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, while, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58865044205 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502777777778 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7051127561 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.176470588 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174301712373 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542038255398 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465273620717 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989771496943 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331286437313 0.0667264976115 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...sier but being so dependent in these is a a good thing or not is something to consi...
^^^
Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...sier but being so dependent in these is a a good thing or not is something to con...
^
Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...sier but being so dependent in these is a a good thing or not is something to consi...
^^^
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e mentioned and many other Technologies doesnt really affect their thinking ability, i...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...heir emotional thinking ability. In addition the above mentioned example, we can fin...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, while, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58865044205 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502777777778 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7051127561 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.176470588 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174301712373 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542038255398 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465273620717 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989771496943 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331286437313 0.0667264976115 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.