"As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems,the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate"
Write a response in which you will discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take .
In developing and supporting your position ,you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these consideration shape your position.
Response:
The author through this statement stakes hold at the point of view linking technology and human's thinking ability,saying that due to more advancements in technology, human's thinking ability is found to be deteriorating the human's thinking ability.I disagree with the author's opinion as I do not believe that relying more on technology could affect humans negatively.
I strongly believe that every new advancement in technology could act as a foundation for humans to think more about it,thereby making a better version than earlier.For example,Computers discovery was a big boon to the field of technology ,that is the only result of the human's outstanding thinking ability.Then, the people started to rely more and more on it thereby increasing their demands and as it is said "Necessity is the mother of invention ",the people's this thought of relying more on computers have lead to the discovery of more advanced computers that was not only cost-effective but also easily accessible to all .Then after that this story of computers never stopped,its more and more versions started coming up and are still coming and helping us to solve almost every other problem whether it is related to simply typing in a doc. file or as hard as setting up command line for a computational task ,computers are everywhere to help us with.
So,on the whole according to me relying on more and more technology may lead new inventions and discoveries ,brainstorming scientist's mind to discover every time the better version of what all we had now rather than putting up a bad effect on human's mind by harming its thinking ability.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-08-24 | Sanjana sharma | 50 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
...teriorating the humans thinking ability.I disagree with the authors opinion as I ...
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Line 2, column 268, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...ns thinking ability.I disagree with the authors opinion as I do not believe that relyin...
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Suggestion: , thereby
...dation for humans to think more about it,thereby making a better version than earlier.Fo...
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...by making a better version than earlier.For example,Computers discovery was a big b...
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Suggestion: , Computers
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...essity is the mother of invention ',the peoples this thought of relying more on...
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...ective but also easily accessible to all .Then after that this story of computers ...
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...tive but also easily accessible to all .Then after that this story of computers neve...
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...at this story of computers never stopped,its more and more versions started coming u...
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...up command line for a computational task ,computers are everywhere to help us with...
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... may lead new inventions and discoveries ,brainstorming scientists mind to discove...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind discovering'.
Suggestion: mind discovering
...d discoveries ,brainstorming scientists mind to discover every time the better version of what a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, still, then, for example, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 268.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13805970149 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07048291601 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 23.0359550562 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 276.183363004 60.3974514979 457% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 344.25 118.986275619 289% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.0 23.4991977007 285% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.5 5.21951772744 278% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245325319317 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141300891825 0.0831039109588 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735993627129 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173432143715 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527179966227 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.3 14.1392134831 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.47 48.8420337079 7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 12.1743820225 241% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.72 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.38706741573 127% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 11.8971910112 277% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 11.2143820225 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.