People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
human society as well as human nature both are very complex topic to talk about and they both are interelated to one another. having said this I mostly agree with the prompt that people's attitudes are mostly determined by their situations rather than a society in which they live. The reasons to espouse this position are given below.
To begin with, all we have in life is present time in life. our society, past and future may impact us but all we have is the present moment. so, most people tend to perform according to their present situations. if human beings had not performed according to the their present needs then still today we would be living in a cave. it is because human beings saw the need to evolve above the present situations and according to their need they performed. so today we are living in age of technology.
Furthur, human being are creative and conscious creaturer, who are able to decide for themselve what is write and what is wrong. today most people are educated and more equipe with facilities, that they are vividly able to think consciously rather than listening this or that from the society. For instance, autocrats ruled the world where people followed thier commands willing or unwillingly, this autocracy lead to the world war. As human are wise beings they saw the need to form UN, to maintain in the peace in the world. Similarly in our country most youth used to study engineering or doctors but with the process of globalization, young are able to see other opportunities to make their career in other fields as well rather than holding onto the presitigious degree of engineering or doctor as assumed by the society.
However, we can not deny the fact that our society influnce us. Knowingly or unknowingly. so we even consider what people in the society think if we take the action or do certain things. These questions comes to most human beings. For example, in our community people go abroad to earn money for whatever reasons. mostly man do the income and women is invovled in household. For womens who want to go abroad to earn money. they have to think twice and thrice as society looks down upon those women. so most women abstain themselves form going abroad. Cultural and social impression on people can not be abstain. it seems to impact directly or indirectly.
To sum up, as expalined above, people are wise and conscious beings that are able to decide right and wrong so they tend to make decision based on their current situations, however society also has a great impression in people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, similarly, so, still, then, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 445.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75730337079 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45970839393 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514606741573 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.2604296156 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4230769231 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1153846154 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.83258426966 310% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182901809452 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449100468971 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649242121391 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109466021292 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523502703077 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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