People's behavior is largely determined by forces, not of their own making.
Every individual is incisive in his or her way of perspective staunch upon various parameters of their life. I agree with the statement that people’s behavior is subject to the situation around them and the reflex of their actions. No one forcefully molds themselves to act or behave in a certain manner, every time social, economical, psychological, and ethical mores somehow contributes to one’s life decisions.
Firstly, the behavior of human is a compendium of reflex actions which are stored in the brain and amalgamated with the inner voice and unconscious soul. Hence, for example, if the violence in the house between the parents is quotidian then this will result in a positive or negative impact on the child. A child’s mentality will change drastically which is detrimental to his or her psychological health.
Secondly, sentiments of one’s are very similar to his or her erstwhile but epiphany of reality is most important as one must change practically with the zeitgeist. If one born in a cab driver's family, he or she must be used to compromise with aspirations. The mental reflex will develop to seek for the good and sagacious source of income to fulfill the aspiration. However, the child born in a wealthy family might never use to believe in hard work and lavishness is very easy for them.
Moreover, sometimes the sudden realization of surrounding factors change the reflex on the actions. Their actions speak louder than voice and they belie sometimes.
In totality, the development will keep changing until the senescence of human and the output every time stalwart on his or her own decision. The situation changes humans positively or negatively. Sometimes the huge effort is needed to overcome this influence and become free. Hence, I agree with the statement that people’s behavior is largely determined by forces, not of their own making.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using the plural form here: 'ones'.
Suggestion: ones
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 308.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10714285714 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86207329901 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574675324675 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7535407369 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.3125 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169846228903 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055223470005 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111892451498 0.0758088955206 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910514848823 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088871497112 0.0667264976115 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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