Making decisions is one of the crucial aspects of every human being that a person needs it in order to flourish in his/her life. What is important here is that people should consider all factors, logical or emotional, and analyze them, then make the better decision. As this writer’s opinion, persons who take care of emotion more than logic, are poor decision makers.
To begin with, thinking emotionally in some situations such as political or financial ones, would cause unpleasant consequences. For instance, political events affect all people’s lives and emotions in making a decision might be harmful to all people in a country. For instance, in elections, people should analyze candidates logically and then choose the best one. Consider a candidate who could not improve the international relationships of the country in the last election, but he was an easygoing person; hence, if people condone the mistakes of the candidate and choose it just based on emotions the country would not improve its situation in the world.
To add, people can make a decision based on emotions easier than a logical one. It is clear that logic-based decisions are demanding more thinking and analyzing; therefore, people prefer to make decisions emotionally; consequently, in a certain area people can affect each others’ minds. For instance, in a company which its manager behaves immorally with one specific employee, and this employee decides to harm the manager’s reputation and describes the manager as an aggressive person to other new employees. After a while, the manager would lose his/her power in the company due to the poor decision the employee has made. If the employee had not made this emotional decision, the manager would have been better relationships with the whole employees.
Finally, although logical decisions in most cases is a preference emotion-based decisions can be practical and harmless in some rare situations. A manager who takes care of old employees in the company and decides to put less pressure on them, never would not regret even if he analyzes this decision logically. Also, emotion-based decisions in regards to our families or friends bring more effective results than logical ones.
To put it briefly, as I mentioned above, one can infer that emotional decision makers in most cases consider as poor ones because not only some decisions such as political or financial decisions are demanding high concentration and logic but also people can attack each other’s emotions and come up harmful effects. However, emotional decisions can bring pleasant results in a small community such as families or friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, consequently, finally, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, such as, in most cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2251.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29647058824 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8956476109 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501176470588 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 722.7 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3104265132 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.411764706 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 5.21951772744 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312493125313 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117978617013 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574168046238 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194236709074 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259294018275 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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