People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
The speaker asserts that the people who make decisions keeping the fact of emotions in mind rather than being cerebral and later justifies the same using logical arguments and facts are poor decision makers. While I certainly agree with the speaker with these, I still believe there can be several instances where the decision taken by being more emotional-oriented is much necessary rather than being completely actual and cerebral.
"A wise man is known as per his wits and acuteness in making quick decisions and judgement." This statement is truly said. And to support a judgement or a decision one has to have strong logic and reason for corroborating the same. For instance, a chemical company known for its innovation in the chemical field is all set to release a new product which can enhance the productivity of crops in countries like in Africa by threefold or more. But the repercussions involved may be like side effects due to improper usage which may affect the marine life in the nearby ponds or lakes. It may be true that if the company does not release the product at the very end by being more emotionally inclined towards aquatic life than the poor and malnourished children in Africa and later cited the reason of company's policy towards better eco-system then the company has not been proper shrewd in making smart decision. What good will be the environment if there is no healthier life to live into?
Similarly, a philanthropist looking towards promoting education open a varsity for poor children free of cost. He then cited the reason of the importance of education in the enhancement of humanity and towards the making of better world but later found himself unable to repay the bank loan he took to open the same varsity. Though he thought of the betterment of children, keeping emotions and considerable sentiments, is the decision he took a wise one? What education can be given to those children if there will be no school?
But many a times it may happen, that the decision should be based on more of emotions rather than being intellectual. May be the logic and reasons not present at the time of making decisions but later in life or after some time, it strikes the person. For instance, a very eminent pharmaceutical company is all set in releasing the cure of malicious disease like AIDS. It is apparent that many people in the world like in poor countries in Africa and other developing countries may not afford the cure since the company has all possibility and in fact, right to enjoy the monopoly. If the company is really looking forward towards the eradication of AIDS, it should also look forward towards reaching as much people possible looking for its cost no matter how much compromise it has to make with the product. This logic and reasoning may not appear at the time but later, if the company or the stakeholders involved cite the very same, the emotional judgement, embraced by the reason later is still shrewd and smart.
Therefore, it is not completely true for the speaker to predicate that those people justifying their decisions some time later after making a decision with more emotionally inclined are poor decision makers. In fact, it depends on the convulation of the matter involved which may or may not be visible at the time.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-28 | AC1990 | 58 | view |
| 2020-01-19 | lcosenza | 54 | view |
| 2019-12-29 | mrigimunjal | 50 | view |
| 2019-12-25 | likhithae | 50 | view |
| 2019-12-22 | yashincontrol | 50 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...if there will be no school? But many a times it may happen, that the decision should...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ons rather than being intellectual. May be the logic and reasons not present at th...
^^
Line 7, column 705, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...d also look forward towards reaching as much people possible looking for its cost no...
^^^^
Line 7, column 786, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... no matter how much compromise it has to make with the product. This logic and re...
^^
Line 9, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the convulation of the matter involved which may or may not be visible at the t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, really, similarly, so, still, then, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2747.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 566.0 442.535393258 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85335689046 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87757670434 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68649844738 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436395759717 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 881.1 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2125580878 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.35 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305818989152 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104932110885 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136457021985 0.0758088955206 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22236065417 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124939106153 0.0667264976115 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.