There are various ways of solving a problem. Some people are emotion-driven and take the most important decisions in the heat of the moment. Later, they support their actions with some logical explanation. According to me, all decisions must be taken by keeping your mind calm and cool.
Firstly, we are humans and we can not remove emotions from our lives, then everything will have no meaning. However, there are few situations where you need to keep emotions away and make some decisions by thinking practically. To illustrate, consider yourself in the shoes of a country president. Then you will have to make n number of decisions every day. And the decisions you make are going to affect hundreds and lakhs of people. So here you cannot sit and whine about it. All the decisions must be intensely calibrated and then made. Hence, you need to take your decisions based on a correct understanding of the situation
Secondly, if you take some decision based on emotion then it might so happen that you only pinpointing to one side of it. And the decision might sound correct for that particular time but after taking a look at the bigger picture then you might find that the decision was wrong all the way long.
However, there might be a case where emotions may help you make decisions. For example, think as there might be someone you know has a person admitted to the hospital. Here we must not take think of money and just consider the well-being of that person. Hence, in some cases taking decisions with help of emotion will help you also
To sum up, I can say that people must sit and discuss if they are in a dilemma of knowing what is wrong or right. As it was once said; It is reason, and not passion, which must guide our deliberations, guide our debate, and guide our decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
... actions with some logical explanation. According to me, all decisions must be taken by keeping...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, you know, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 320.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64375 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48215506163 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51875 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3494226094 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5555555556 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 5.21951772744 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273703685625 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941047447713 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807286259994 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156515770677 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841302098256 0.0667264976115 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 48.8420337079 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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