Decisions are the sets of thoughts which arises in our mind about particular situation. Decisions can be either emotional or logical. In some situation emotional decision are beneficial then logical and vice versa. In this statement author asserts that making decision based on emotion are poor decision maker. I do agree with author to some extent.
Usually, we have seen that emotional decision are random and related to our feeling. It leads us to involve in activities which are trivial and unnecessary for us. For example, when we went to shopping because of our random emotional decision we happened to buy reluctant things which on later we realize is unnecessary.
Emotional decision can sometime be harmful for individuals as well as for society. For instance, policeman who is elected to protect the society and national for welfare took emotional decision being persuade by emotional story of miscreant. Is not it harmful for society? Every criminal can make any fake emotional anecdote and easily get rids of punishment.
But, emotional decision cannot be mistake every time. Sometime certain situation we take inadvertently emotional decision ongoing, we realize it actually works out and prove to be beneficial. As in great novel by Paulo Coelho "Alchemists", the writer follow his omens and at end he get it what he want and proves that omens can never be wrong. Logical decisions are best to take but sometime over thinking can leads to disruption.
Finally, I would like to conclude that emotional decisions are prove to be poor decision for most of the cases but its not always beneficial to relies and depend on logical decision everything on this earth can have logic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 292, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...e writer follow his omens and at end he get it what he want and proves that omens c...
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Line 4, column 307, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... his omens and at end he get it what he want and proves that omens can never be wron...
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Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'proved', 'proven'.
Suggestion: proved; proven
...o conclude that emotional decisions are prove to be poor decision for most of the cas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, so, then, well, as for, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 278.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13309352518 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86907205428 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557553956835 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9844266404 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9411764706 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391081621904 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149038578656 0.0831039109588 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114095911808 0.0758088955206 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248451181108 0.150359130593 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115241705921 0.0667264976115 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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