Many people make their decisions based on their emotions. This context is right up to some extent but always taking decisions on an emotion basis does not become a good decision. For a good decision maker decision made by proper brainstorming and firmness proves to be a good and appropriate decision. The decision should always be taken by looking into the current circumstances.
To be a good decision maker one needs to take a decision in such a way that there is no need to justify it. Decisions that are taken should always consider the present situation and considering all situations appropriately. For example in army training, the higher officer's tells the soldiers that they have to take decision with stolidity. The decision that they take should be firm otherwise any mishap may happen. Suppose in case of war high army officers needs to make a decision, and while taking that decision if the emotions of soldiers are taken into consideration then there would be a great mishap and misfortune. The decision taken should be firm with proper brainstorming and with appropriate logic.
Some decisions are there that need to be taken through emotions. When a political leader can never make a decision with solidity. If he takes a decision with solidity it becomes very difficult for him to manage the whole nation. So the decision that he takes should be by considering people's emotions.
Speech that political leader gives is always based on people's emotions and sentiments. They make promises and fulfill them according to their priority. Accordingly, they oscillate their decision depending upon priority. Sometimes they make decisions for the upliftment of the society. For example, a terrorist named Kashyap who was a part of 26/11 who came to India and killed many peoples, the decision of hanging him was appropriately correct.
Furthermore giving more examples, if a case is filed in judiciary court and the prosecutor is made against the culprit which is a charge of some crime. If the prosecution has no evidence regarding the culprit then at that time it is not possible for the judge to make decisions based on emotions and if he takes decisions based on emotions then someone life with no crime done will get destroyed. He should make good decisions based on the situation and circumstances considering all points.
Lastly, I want to conclude that a good decision-maker is someone who does a good brainstorm, firm in this decision, considers all appropriate points, looking into the surroundings and then takes decisions about what should be the right decision. Considering all these aspects if someone is taking a firm decision is always be a good decision-maker as this always being accepted by society and produce appropriate results afterward.
- An international development organization in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A While seeds for this new type of millet cost more farmers will be paid 50
- Government should invest as much money in the arts they do in military 66
- A recently issued twenty year study on headaches suffered by the residents of Mentia investigated the possible therapeutic effect of consuming salicylates Salicylates are members of the same chemical family as aspirin a medicine used to treat headaches Al 54
- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers 50
- Mass media and the internet have caused people s attention spans to get shorter However the overall effect has been positive while people are less able to focus on one thing they more than make up for it with an enhanced ability to sort through large quan 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...that need to be taken through emotions. When a political leader can never make a dec...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...nging him was appropriately correct. Furthermore giving more examples, if a case is file...
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Line 10, column 324, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...one is taking a firm decision is always be a good decision-maker as this always be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, if, lastly, look, may, regarding, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2326.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08971553611 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86296905257 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435448577681 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 737.1 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.3067048125 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9166666667 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0416666667 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462992078228 0.243740707755 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165396487985 0.0831039109588 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684526611796 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283776122563 0.150359130593 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354070304061 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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