“People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.”
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
People who make decisions based on emotion firstly but afterwards analyzing the situation with logic that decisions proved to be wrong or poor decisions. Decision should be judicious in any situation so that after taking that decision one can't feel regret about it.
Primarily, decisions are made on two bases one with mind and one with heart. But always mind says is not same as heart says. Both are different in every situation. so that where calculations are necessary decision should be with logic. For example in mathematics one cannot go with what heart says in that he or she wants to apply logic and do calculation with appropriate formula and then answer the question. In that decision based on emotion is poor decision.Moreover, decisions that doctors take based on patients situation. They gave medicine according to the situation not based on what their heart says. They apply their logic and think that what are pros and cons of those situations which medicine is suitable for him and then they take decision. Not only in medical field but also in art, politics, history, science and education decision should be wise and appropriate. I should say in all the fields this situation is applicable from little child to old man all people have to make decision.
Secondly, for a politician there are many situations where they want to make quick decision.at that point if they apply logic that is not appropriate. If time is not a constraint then they can think more and take decision. But in many situations they want to take decisions. They have to take many decisions so that they don't need to think logically. If any wrong decision by politician can ruin the reputation of whole party. Sometimes their decision may prove to be wrong.All decision taken by mind is also not wise every time. It is said that "Think before you speak”. That is absolutely correct in this particular situation. That is also correct decision based on emotions proved to be wrong and poor.
Lastly, any decisions by historians are also quick decision. Best example is Mahatma Gandhi. He took a quick decision that he wants an independent India. For that he gave his life and gave Indians an independent country. All this examples suggests that all the decisions are not poor based on emotions. All the decisions are not good and wise based on emotion but some of the decisions that are best taken by emotion and quickly.
In sum, I am totally agree with that normal people who make decision based on emotion and justify those decision with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'lastly', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211180124224 0.240241500013 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.190476190476 0.157235817809 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0890269151139 0.0880659088768 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0600414078675 0.0497285424764 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0496894409938 0.0444667217837 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12215320911 0.12292977631 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0310559006211 0.0406280797675 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62591090059 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0227743271222 0.030933414821 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0662525879917 0.0997080785238 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0165631469979 0.0249443105267 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0227743271222 0.0148568991511 153% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2588.0 2732.02544248 95% => OK
No of words: 440.0 452.878318584 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88181818182 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.288636363636 0.366273622748 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238636363636 0.280924506359 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190909090909 0.200843997647 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138636363636 0.132149295362 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62591090059 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 219.290929204 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.420454545455 0.48968727796 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.7367741991 55.4138127331 83% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6194690265 136% => OK
Sentence length: 15.7142857143 23.380412469 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.431207857 59.4972553346 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4285714286 141.124799967 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 23.380412469 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.464285714286 0.674092028746 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.21349557522 211% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 39.5779220779 51.4728631049 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.21379310345 1.64882698954 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389146567477 0.391690518653 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.137736555353 0.123202303941 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.115232321354 0.077325440228 149% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.439227925466 0.547984918172 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168191057278 0.149214159877 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123152267111 0.161403998019 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985379966108 0.0892212321368 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.333166607001 0.385218514788 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0939791271452 0.0692045440612 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280709141475 0.275328986314 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826905196191 0.0653680567796 126% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88274336283 307% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.70907079646 332% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.5995575221 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.