While emotion based decision might be gratifying for the time being, it poses greater risk of not being the right choice. Even if one manage to back up that decision afterward using logic, the logic tends to be fallacious and misleading. So, those who make decision based on emotion are highly likely to be poor decision makers.
Firstly, logic is one of the most important decision making tool in our life. It helps us to understand the validity of our decision; to ponder the both sides of the coin so to speak. Which provides a strong basis to build the future in the long run. Good decision makers in most of the cases are driven by logic. Logic is their primary tool for analysing the alternatives, extrapolating the situational data if needed and finally making a sound decision. Those who ignore this logic based approach are most of the times poor decision makers.
Instead of taking the logic based approach some people take decision emotionally. It has some very fundamental flaws. Emotion is ephemeral and misleading, not much helpful in the long run. If we look at the current situation of our society, we can see that a lot of crimes are a direct result of uncontrolled emotion. Emotions are extreme; if base characteristics of human emotion like hatred, anger and lust dominates a person then he is bound to make bad decisions.
Even if one manages to make good decision with emotion, he might not follow through his decision. For example, a person might decide to join army based on his emotion of patriotism but physically is not a good fit for that role. Then he will not be able to follow through his decision. If he used logic then properly assessed his abilities then he would have made a right decision to serve his country by other means.
If one wants to use emotion effectively in his life, then the best time to use it when deciding between multiple logical choice. It can also be used after the decision is taken, to properly follow through the decision reach the goal. But using emotion to make decision in the first place and later justifying with logic is not fruitful and bound to fail.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the both sides of the coin so to speak. Which provides a strong basis to build the fu...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...be able to follow through his decision. If he used logic then properly assessed hi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'for example', 'so to speak', 'in the first place']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220048899756 0.240241500013 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.178484107579 0.157235817809 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0929095354523 0.0880659088768 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0709046454768 0.0497285424764 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0562347188264 0.0444667217837 126% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.107579462103 0.12292977631 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0611246943765 0.0406280797675 150% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50086347295 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.041564792176 0.030933414821 134% => OK
Particles: 0.00244498777506 0.0016655270985 147% => OK
Determiners: 0.0904645476773 0.0997080785238 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0171149144254 0.0249443105267 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00733496332518 0.0148568991511 49% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2125.0 2732.02544248 78% => OK
No of words: 374.0 452.878318584 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68181818182 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.302139037433 0.366273622748 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22192513369 0.280924506359 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155080213904 0.200843997647 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0748663101604 0.132149295362 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50086347295 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 219.290929204 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505347593583 0.48968727796 103% => OK
Word variations: 54.3315382948 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8095238095 23.380412469 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4497653294 59.4972553346 51% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.19047619 141.124799967 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8095238095 23.380412469 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.619047619048 0.674092028746 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 40.0020371785 51.4728631049 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.272 1.64882698954 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255305432277 0.391690518653 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120660011519 0.123202303941 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0727073735488 0.077325440228 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.544125045864 0.547984918172 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.110750998814 0.149214159877 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104579440027 0.161403998019 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100924037167 0.0892212321368 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.324168967813 0.385218514788 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0839181115332 0.0692045440612 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166873508859 0.275328986314 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598849352558 0.0653680567796 92% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.