People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The mind and heart develops a cordial relationship between them. But at a number of times, what the mind wants is rescinded by what the heart wants and vice versa. The heart thinks through emotions where as the brain takes a logical path to get itself to decide. As the philanthropist say, mankind is difficult to understand and is always in a state of dilemma, the brain might want to do something, but the heart doesn't.
The human soul is a beautiful creation of god to adore and yet, its true natures and powers are still not known. The secrets of the world, the power of the soul and so many other facts are yet to be discovered. Having given the gift of five senses, people do talk about having the sixth sense, the sense of instinct. Though, future is unpredictable, the mind does have an idea of what is going to happen through which it enlightens the human soul and makes it act accordingly.
People making decisions by instinct are the ones who have an idea of what is going to happen. The body translates this instinct in form of emotions. While making a decision, it is very essential that the decision maker knows the consequences of his decision. A decision has to be for the good, of not only the individual, but of everyone. Once this decision is made, it is easy to justify by logic too. The brain can be deceptive. It feels what it sees and projects its decision. However, emotions get you to know the true side of someone and that is when you take the correct decisions. If emotions caught are correct, logic follows and your decision is accepted by a majority of people.
However, not all decisions should be emotion based, because then those decisions could not go in the favor of the individual. For example, if a person is suffering from some family issues and is depressed all day and all long, it is very much obvious that the decisions he makes during this time would be one of which he does not have complete control on. Emotions, this time could be deceptive, and logic then couldn't justify it.
Every decision based on the correct emotion has an instinctive base which is then easily supported by logical reasoning, and hence are good decision makers. However, when a decision is made based on emotions which are psychologically wrong, those are the poor decision makers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, hence, however, if, so, still, then, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6301703163 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53716113281 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503649635036 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5133683268 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6818181818 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304235103563 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861574925125 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957500752433 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171852374958 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135492349371 0.0667264976115 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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