People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Definition of a stability is being in a state of mind where you control your emotion instead of the opposite. Stability of mind essential and most basic condition for sane decision making. It is known and has been demonstrated in many instances including terrorism and "crimes of passion" that being in control of emotions clouds the decision-making ability of a person. This some times can lead to not only rash decisions but a regret for the rest of the life.
Furthermore, the let's shed some light on the most recent event related to the issue in question. President of the USA, Donald Trump's first comments on the Charlottesville incident in which he improvised "There is violence on many sides." is a perfect example of bad decision making under the influence of emotions. After such a horrific incident the country turned to Trump expecting him to release the pressure of hatred among the citizens of the country. Most of them were aware about his opinions on white nationalists but still, there was a hope that he will take a position on the right side of the issue denounce them. His rash improvisation made him a center of criticism in the USA and made the situation even worst.
Moreover, the other example pressing this point is the act of terrorism. Most of the terrorist who commits this horrific act are overburdened with emotions which they justify using logic.
However, critics might argue that decisions made without emotions are harsh and insensitive. To counter-argue this it is true that one should have a touch of his emotions in the decision making but the emotions should not be in-charge.
Therefore, on the analysis of all the examples mentioned above, it is evident that in order to make rational decisions one should control his emotions rather than his emotions controlling him.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...making under the influence of emotions. After such a horrific incident the country tu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 306.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01307189542 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87059091396 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6957149631 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221214337245 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719534040879 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582395350775 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121534622261 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453547685853 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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