People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Many people would agree that decision-making always needs emotional and logical investment.emotional investment often reflects our will to do that particular thing like whether we want to do that thing or not or sometimes it is influenced by the results after it and may be the people involved in it.logical investment often considers the effects of it and takes into account every part of it like pros and cons.There can be a conflict between emotional and logical investment.
I mostly agree with the issue because decisions taken emotionally sometimes can have hazardous effects not only on the person who has taken it but also the people who are part of it.sometimes such kind of decisions may prove to be efficacious but id does not mean that it will always be like this.but most of the times such decisions fail because there is no logical investment in it.Fortunately they may succeed.people who take such decisions need to understand that even though they are justifying their decisions with logic but before they were taken under emotional influence
people must understand that before taking any kind of decision it needs to be analyzed.Every decision that we take must be examined by pros and cons and its effects on other people.sometimes emotions can themself include logical elements but that does not mean that we decide everything emotionally
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 2235.4752809 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 223.0 442.535393258 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13901345291 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08284793927 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 215.323595506 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529147982063 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 20.2370786517 10% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 111.0 23.0359550562 482% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 205.5 60.3974514979 340% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 573.0 118.986275619 482% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 111.5 23.4991977007 474% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.5 5.21951772744 297% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228736491947 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177855546852 0.0831039109588 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058733606127 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161730561026 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057122937653 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 58.5 14.1392134831 414% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -49.65 48.8420337079 -102% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 47.8 12.1743820225 393% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.72 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.9 8.38706741573 142% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 100.480337079 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 46.4 11.2143820225 414% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.