There are several things to be needed to make a wise and thoughtful decision. Some people argue that people who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterward are poor decision-makers. However, in the following essays, I will expound that this can be a good way to settle some cases.
Admittedly, relying on individuals' emotions, and justifying the decision seems to be illogical and absurd. Every people have their own perceptions and feelings so it is hard to depend just on their emotional responses. Furthermore, people's emotion is easy to change and unstable. Even if we examine the same person and in the same situation, whether he or she feels good or bad can affect what they feel about the situation. Thus, unless we have the strict and accurate criteria related to how to feel, we might be hard to find our emotion the measure for the good decisions.
Nonetheless, thinking and making decisions based on emotion can help people to deal with their situation more wisely. Because all we have some natural characteristics such as empathy. People also are educated to bear good feelings and eager to help others. In certain circumstances, people's emotional aspect can facilitate to make a decision quickly and correctly. For example, imagine the child who is drowning in the water and saying "Help me." If there is a person who is accidentally seeming the child, the person would feel to help the child and rescue him or her. Otherwise, if he would think about and understand what the situation is logically, it would be late to save a life. Like this, sometimes emotions can urge people to do good things.
Furthermore, this method (following the emotions and find the reason to do it) would be helpful especially for individuals to figure out what to do for the future. Sometimes, people are not good at explaining what they want to be or do not want to be. Deciding the future's job or major seems to be difficult for people who don't know themselves. In this case, it would be better to navigate their minds and to figure out how they feel. Our feeling reflects our complex thought, excitement, concerns, anxiety, and even the rational reasons. Thus, it can be an effective and beneficial way to look thoroughly at their emotions for making better decisions.
Consequently, good decision-makers can exploit both their emotions and rational reason to do it. Unless people are faced to make economic or diplomatic policies which should not be based on emotions of the policy-makers, sometimes, it would be helpful to follow our emotions and find the reason why we feel like this to make a better solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...ision seems to be illogical and absurd. Every people have their own perceptions and f...
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Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...Help me.' If there is a person who is accidentally seeming the child, the person would feel to hel...
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Line 4, column 323, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...or seems to be difficult for people who dont know themselves. In this case, it would...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2209.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 450.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90888888889 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80224689389 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477777777778 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9107495521 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0434782609 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5652173913 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13043478261 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31209535756 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105673342567 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176084083308 0.0758088955206 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225819903752 0.150359130593 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162545759252 0.0667264976115 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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