Whether we want or not, we should encounter the moment to make a critical decision. Some people think that the essential judgment of non-expert has little value while other people regard that non-specialists also can make the right decision like experts. This following essay will largely disagree with the former opinion and advocate the ability of non-experts with the below reasons and examples.
Admittedly, in passing critical judgment, following experienced experts’ opinions seems to be adequate for us than following the public sentiment or average person’s opinion. Because experts have in-depth knowledge and many experiences in their fields with life-long dedication and ceaseless efforts, they could have an insight into various situations and make a solution when our society faces an unexpected obstacle. For example, when people get sick, they would go to the hospital rather than asking their friends or web-sites. Even though some laymen are knowledgable of medical information, people do not want to give the chance to diagnose their diseases by a non-expert. Like this, in the field of diplomacy, experts’ opinion is essential to make an agreement or accord which could affect a nation’s economy and society. If critical judgment related to the nation’s future is decided by public opinion or laymen’s insight, it would be harmful to all of us. Thus, like the stated argument, in some fields, it is better to give decisive power to experts.
However, we should not ignore the non-expert’s insight and commonsense in specific fields. Although they do not have trained skills or experience in the laboratory, people could make the right decision by relying on their commonsense and general knowledge. For example, manufactures of new products usually ask just ordinary customers about the review and feedback of their product. In those processes, they could find the little or critical defection of the new product, which is not detected even by experts. Additionally, the case of the Vietnam war by the United States also illustrates the ability to pass judgment of general people. Many people did not buttress the war against Vietnam except experts in the white house, and eventually, it revealed that the worst war made by the United States. Therefore, public and laypeople also positively influence in certain circumstances.
Furthermore, non-expert’s enthusiasm and high-motivation could contribute to the society. Beginners are not fettered by conventional thought and do not follow the habitual courses of thought; thus, it could relate to breakthrough inventions in some times. For example, Jamie Link, who was a graduate school student, invented a smart dust that could be used to find a tumor. She was just a beginner chemist, but her insightful trial and motivated effort made a worthy invention. There are numerous instances like Jamie Link in specific fields; therefore, we should respect in some degree to the beginners and non-experts.
Consequently, the author states that we should follow the experts’ opinion when we pass a critical judgment in “every” field, however, in practically and empirically, non-experts’ commonsense should not be dismissed in certain circumstances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2745.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 502.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46812749004 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99184154916 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52390438247 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 837.0 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3728722723 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.347826087 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8260869565 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91304347826 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12619817132 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361535206727 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394176794521 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770328462973 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365895041432 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 100.480337079 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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