People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement states that people attitude is mainly reflection of immediate surrounding and situation rather than the society they live. I agree with the opinion.
The society on the other hand creates an overall impression on a person. The major believes and acceptable dressing sense are derived from the society. these practices shape a person’s high-level living style such as dress code and acceptable conduct. people belonging a society would be usually wearing similar dressing and may be prohibit a certain food and drinks items.
However, the society is large circumference including multiple families. Each family unit, even similar are still distinct. Each family’s uniqueness is determined by combination of its values, lifestyle and mentality. A person spent his most the day with family members, coworker and friends. With time, each of these circle start impacting his outlook on life. Since, each person has his own set of hangout group, two people belonging to same society will act different in similar condition.
For instance, a professional belonging to family of intellects and company of well-educated individuals, will definitely think, speak and act in more sophistical manner even in times of heat debate. While a person belonging to crude bunch of friends and colleagues and less educated family will be more loud even in situation when there is hardly any need to be hyper active.
A daily wage work with low education level employed in cooperative world eventually learn mannerism better than other resident of home.
Similarly, two women belonging to eastern society, will apparently have same value for their relationship. but, they will act in different manner in a difficult situation based on their immediate surrounding. A financially independent lady, whose parents believe in woman empowerment and rights, will not stand an abusive husband. Whereas, a girl brought up in family where girls are considered inferior to male members, would not be able collect courage against such a husband.
On higher-level, the society’s norm are reflected in person everyday life but with a closer observation each individual, it will be clearly obvious the major traits of his or her behavior derived from his/her immediate surroundings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, however, if, look, may, similarly, so, still, well, whereas, while, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 355.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50422535211 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92467629021 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614084507042 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.7468340701 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135327080418 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451850050331 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530349391644 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804825715444 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797706771261 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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