The statement says that people usually do not have any control on their behavior as there are some external forces governing them. I strongly disagree with this statement as i firmly believe that free will governs most of people's behavior, and that sometimes, people are aware of their bad habits but are reluctant to change them because they are anchored deeply in them.
Some people may say that the statement is true, arguing that the environment of a person may influence how they behave. Environment do in fact influence a person's behavior sometimes, but it doesn't apply to all the people in that environment. For example people say that a someone born in a bad neighbourhood will grow to become a thief or a bad person, but this doesn't hold true for everyone as there are a countless number of people from these bad neighbourhood that have grown to become some of the best citizens their country could have.
Free will, on the other hand, is the factor that truly controls a person's behavior. We all behave differently, and in the majority of the cases, our behavior is the result of our own thinking and decisions. We rarely do something that we don't want to do, and if we do so, we do it knowing all the reasons that made us do so. Just try to tell someone that there is a force governing their actions and see how they will react: some may even laugh at you. Even the people who agree with the statement believe, deep inside them, that their free will is responsible of their own action.
Furthermore, sometimes people know that they have a bad habit, but are reluctant to change it. This reluctance may come from the fact that these habits are deeply anchored in these people that people just abandon fighting these habits and let them be a part of their lives while being fully aware of them. An example to this is a smoker who knows all the dangers of smoking, but who still smokes because he has gone too far and going back will be too difficult for him.
All in All, we have seen how the statement that there are external forces governing people's behavior does not hold true. Even though the environment may in some cases shape someone's behavior, free will and people's reluctance to abandon a bad habit are the major elements that are controlling our behavior. That why i disagree with the statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ce a persons behavior sometimes, but it doesnt apply to all the people in that environ...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'someone'?
Suggestion: a; someone
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Suggestion: doesn't
...ecome a thief or a bad person, but this doesnt hold true for everyone as there are a c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...best citizens their country could have. Free will, on the other hand, is the fac...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Suggestion: don't
...cisions. We rarely do something that we dont want to do, and if we do so, we do it k...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... are controlling our behavior. That why i disagree with the statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, while, for example, in fact, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60722891566 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41570801868 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448192771084 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.325941442 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9375 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170739306523 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714907834366 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500635654642 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107415899042 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403949968883 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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