The given statement implies that people behavior is largely determined by forces. Behavior relates to the actual expression of feelings and actions and it's driven by attitude and that's involves mind's predisposition to certain ideas and values, thus i can't agree totally with the statement, as if we do believe completely that our behavior is something that is out of our hands to change we will be also tolerating all that bad behaviors within the society as it is something given and not to change.
It is true that behavior, specially in some bad situations, can be irrational and conducted by many facts, scientific ones like the genes and also historic ones regarding life experiences like someone who's been marked by previous events in his life. however we should consider that as human we do have the liberty of making decision and choices and will help us fight the external forces if we want to improve our self. Any behavior considered as an obstacle in front of our improvement can be challenged and changed, you can learn for example to control your anger in order to reinforce your social or personal life.
Another thing to mention is that values are an important element that affects individuals and how they behave towards others, and i do consider value as something we can change even if it's predicted by the social environment and Education, we still have the freedom to improve our values if we do have strong will. By reading more and learning more each day we can correct our values and ideas socializing and participating into community works can make us change the way we see life. If you get out from your cocoon you will be able to embellish your values which for sure will have a good impact on your behavior.
Unfortunately there still situations where individuals behavior is completely driven by forces beyond his ability to change, and this manly comes when the person does not have a strong attitude that will help facing all the social and genetic obstacle. in some cases the life experience is really a strong one that the person will be destroyed instead of learning from it, and in such case the best solution will be to get external help from specialized professionals to help get through this.
Thus Education, Environment and many other external factors can be part of an individuals behavior, we should also consider that as humans we do have the ability to change and adapt our behavior, it just needs strong will and some work on our personality.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hould also consider that as humans we do have the ability to change and adapt our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, regarding, so, still, thus, another thing, for example, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 430.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81395348837 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62924847422 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495348837209 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.6022189236 60.3974514979 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.181818182 118.986275619 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0909090909 23.4991977007 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 5.21951772744 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115509490619 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639912006887 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792387862361 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676112035356 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391990153026 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 14.1392134831 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.