A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
In today's modern world the number of crimes have increased in leaps in bounds. Stress and strain, hurry and worry have become hallmarks of our lives forcing us to commit felony knowingly or unknowingly. The one who is accomplice in it is equally responsible and should be punished. But according to me it is not the crime that matters but the degree of crime matters. A crime can range from stealing a pen to kidnapping or murdering someone. The issue that a person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract ans should not retain any civil rights or right to benefit from his or her own labour is a contentious one.
The first and the foremost question which should be kept in mind when taking a decision to withdraw any kind of civil rights or any other kind of rights for that matter, is that what is the impact of the crime committed. As discussed earlier if a person has stolen a pen it does not lead to any lose to any individual rather than the one whose pen is stolen. In this case civil rights should not come into picture as the matter can be solved within them. Yes but a case of female exploitations or rapes is such a crime which breaks all social barriers and in this case all civil rights and right to benefit should be taken away from the one accused.
The government plays a major role in the issue discussed above. Suppose a person is accused of murdering someone and the laws of government states that he should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his own labour,this will definitely help reduce the number of murders as compared to a ten years sentence in jail. Same is applicable for crimes like rapes, bomb-blasts and anything which leads to mass killing.
So it all boils down to the fact retaining or detaining civil rights is completely dependent on the degree of crime and there must be a clear indication or criteria as to why this decision is taken based on different crimes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... kind of rights for that matter, is that what is the impact of the crime committe...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...the right to benefit from his own labour,this will definitely help reduce the number ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53107344633 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44161286761 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497175141243 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1595551277 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.571428571 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.524380437631 0.243740707755 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159753186664 0.0831039109588 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19278788076 0.0758088955206 254% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293927640827 0.150359130593 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136565388954 0.0667264976115 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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