Author claims that a person who commits crime should not retain any civil rights. I agree to this point as crime is always unethical to commit whether it is knowingly or unknowingly. Criminal should not get any help from government body. They should be chastised from the society.
Committing a crime is never an option regardless of the situation. A person who commits a crime should be guilty and should abide from all the civil rights as they dont deserve to vindicate the case. They should not be provided with lawyer as the crime they committed should be declared as soon as fast if they are proven guilty in first hearing. For example, in India criminal gets to hire a advocate even after proving culpable, still the process is carried for 2-3 years which deserved to be declared in 1 year only.
There should be strict rule for criminals. They should not be given any rights. This fears the people and may mitigate the chances of committing crimes. There should be proper laws for every crime happened. No ruling person or a partisan should have an authority to disclose the case. For example, if any big personality is using gun to shot other person saying that he's is firing for his sake of life. Such incidents should also be considered as crime as there is always way for it. And if not then this should have a strong evidence to prove inculpable.
Rather than commiting crime, people should always think of any help, consulting police man as they are present for helping our lives. In conclusion, Crime is crime and there should be strict laws for this and should not get any benifit from his or her own labour
- The autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders; if the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked, both its economy and national identity are endangered. Because illegal immigrants pose such threats, every effor 63
- The first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familiar. 50
- A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...abide from all the civil rights as they dont deserve to vindicate the case. They sho...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...example, in India criminal gets to hire a advocate even after proving culpable, s...
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: he's
...ng gun to shot other person saying that hes is firing for his sake of life. Such in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, still, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 58.6224719101 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 2235.4752809 60% => OK
No of words: 289.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64705882353 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33747204847 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522491349481 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 704.065955056 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1066916695 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6111111111 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0555555556 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61111111111 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317748195813 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118672060981 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953182806211 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231385231378 0.150359130593 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670282018551 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 14.1392134831 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.8420337079 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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