“The powerful aremost respected not when they exercise their power, butwhen they refrain from exercising it.”
Write an essay in which you develop and support a position on the statement above. In writing your essay, you should consider both when the statement may be true and when it may be false.
Powerful, by definition, is the ability to do some things and refrain or abstin means to abjure using force to achieve your desire. Some may think obtaining power is equivalent to use power in any desire way that they like. But others state that powerful people should abstain it and follow their needs from appropriate ways that led gislation suggested. I strongly agree with the latter idea a I will explain it now.
Some argue that obtaining power, political or physical, though and exhusting. Thus, a powerful person could use his power for achieving his purpose. For example, Dadashi an iranina body builder which gained lots of prize and achievement works as body guard. He exploit his power and famous to threathen people and do desire actions like mugging. Unfortounately this behavoiur was not tolearable for people and some of them try to claim to the court. But before these action comes to play a person decapitulate him suddenly. These action shows that people really disagree with the idea of using power and try to stop it, by low enforcemnet or indivisually.
Another example of powerful person in sport is Mohammad Ali who was the best boxer in his era. He become world champion several times but he had never exploit his power. one of his friend told a story about some muggers who tried to kill him, they did not know him, and got his wallet. He just try to protect himself without trying to hurt them.
Apart from powerful person in sports, some politician also had a lot of power but they did not use them inappropriately. For example, Shah, tha last king of Iran,had enough power, army and money to repress chaos in 1979 Iranian revolution. But he decided to surrunde the power and government instead of using his power for carnecine his people. Iranina people acknowledge him and his behaviour after several years.
In conclusion, it is clear that exploit power is not acceptable by people and people supposed powerful people use their power appropriately. Shah and Mohammad Ali are two examples that people acknowledge them after years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'I'?
Suggestion: a; I
.... I strongly agree with the latter idea a I will explain it now. Some argue that o...
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Line 2, column 207, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun prize seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of prizes'.
Suggestion: lots of prizes
...hi an iranina body builder which gained lots of prize and achievement works as body guard. He...
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Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'exploits'.
Suggestion: exploits
...and achievement works as body guard. He exploit his power and famous to threathen peopl...
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Line 2, column 461, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this action' or 'these actions'?
Suggestion: this action; these actions
...m try to claim to the court. But before these action comes to play a person decapitulate him...
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Line 2, column 524, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this action' or 'These actions'?
Suggestion: This action; These actions
...lay a person decapitulate him suddenly. These action shows that people really disagree with ...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'exploited'.
Suggestion: exploited
...champion several times but he had never exploit his power. one of his friend told a sto...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...mes but he had never exploit his power. one of his friend told a story about some ...
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er. one of his friend told a story about some muggers who tried to kill him, they...
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Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , had
...For example, Shah, tha last king of Iran,had enough power, army and money to repress...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, really, so, then, thus, apart from, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86647727273 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54639130237 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559659090909 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7924719757 60.3974514979 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.5714285714 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7619047619 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142281214253 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481287505513 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431926670163 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940881200076 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297741620904 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.